增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1每处错误下画一横线，并在该词下面写互相修改的词。

      2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

It was cloudy day with little rain in the air. I stood at the roadside waiting for a taxi while suddenly I felt a voice beside me. It was a boy who was wearing poor cloth. I felt very disgusted that I tried to pull myself away. The boy kept follow me shouting out "Big brother! Big brother!" and I didn't answer him at all. I heard him call out again, which makes me angry. So I shouted at him that we had no money to spare. However, the boy said to me, " Brother, will you please to help me cross the road?" I held the boy's hand firm and helped him cross the road.

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The other day, some of my classmates and I took a bicycle trip along the "Huan Shan Green Road", that was specially built for people to relax ourselves. The scenery along the road was fascinating, with trees, flowers, hills and lakes on both side. We stopped by a lake for a rest, where a great many of people are playing happily. But something unpleasant caught our eyes. There was rubbish here or there, and there were many plastic bags and bottles floated on the surface of the lake. Such beautiful place was so serious polluted. What a shame! In the end, we couldn't help collecting the rubbish after we left.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏间词符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（——），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11）不计分。

    My father took me out camping for the first time when I as seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.

    Ore evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target, Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.

    That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    As Christmas is coming, I plan to buy something for my parent. What I want to give back is a VIP card of a health club but neither of them is doing enough exercise. My father works very hardly as a teacher, spending most of his time at school. My mother loves reading and often bury herself in her books. Therefore, all of them should exercise more from now on.

    I want to give them this card to express my love and thanks for them. I hope that they will be able to get relaxing in the health club and make more friends here. At the same time, I hope that they can take care their health.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US,which was very interested.One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door come by to help.As the old man looked over the things on the yard that were to be sold,he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees.On the box was a card say:“25 cents each...”“You will never sell these for that much.”he told Nick.Convinced,Nick has brought the price up to 10 cents a piece.Without a moment's delay,my neighbor picked up the box out announced:“I'll take them.”

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用( \ )划掉；

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈没出错误及其修改均仅限一次；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It is Sunday. Mrs. Read got up early in the Morning. She had some housework to do it. After breakfast she has a look at the watch and found it had stopped work. She bought it ten years ago, so she wanted buy a new one. Her daughter Sue was only four. Her husband was busy with his works and nobody looked for Sue. The woman could not let her to stay at home. So she took Sue to the shop in the town with she. It was a good day, Mrs. Read and her daughter went to the three floor in order to choose her favorite watch.