增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Peter,

    I am more than happier to know you got the first prize in the speech contest. I'm writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you.

    It is known to all, success lie in hard work. I think you must have been practiced a lot. And at the same time you must have gained much valuable skills. Could you please help me but tell me what I should pay attention when I speak in public? You know, when made a speech, I always get nervously. I would appreciate it if you can give me some advices.

    Please write to me as soon as you can.

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（︿），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

Dear Mr. Hu,

    I' m glad to hear that the English newspaper is to be starting in our school. Now I'd like to give you some tip. Personally, I hold the view that the newspaper should colorful, including materials connected to our lessons. For example, the newspaper can regular provide different articles on western culture and customs, as will help us know more about the outside world. In addition, it would be better to set a special column（专栏） which we can express your feelings. We really need such a place to release our pressure and practice express ourselves in English. I truly hope that you can follow in my advice.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    We have lived in the house for ten years, so the kitchen is the heart of our home. For us, the kitchen is where holds special sounds, smells and memories. We enjoy the sound of my grandmother sings old songs coming from her childhood as she cooks. Every week he prepares a delicious meal to us. We often sit in the kitchen talking while we waited for the food to be ready. It may seem like a special place to someone else, but when I am in low spirit, it warms me like a big blanket on a winter morning. Before the school, we say goodbye to our parents and hug them cheerful when we get home.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I once paid a brief visit China ten years ago and it was my dream to return someday. Travel the length of the country felt like a dream then. However, in 2017 it finally came truly. Not for a few weeks' adventure, and to live and work for a year. It was an unique opportunity to experience many about the mysterious country. I would communicate with people from different backgrounds and have lots of funs. I was warmly welcomed the moment when I arrived at the college. I thought, "I am going to enjoy this." It really go like this. Indeed, my students often ask, "Bruce, why are we always smiling?" What else could I say?