增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The earthquake affects the students of the destroying areas in many ways. How can we help them? One expert says the child will have feelings of fear, angry and feel they are not safe after the quake. They will find it hardly to focus. They will tend to cry and shout and tremble. And they might be afraid to be alone.The teenagers will find it difficult to live in a balance way. If things get worse they might not be able to focus to their studies. He also say we can do something to help the children. The first thing is that to build up trust with them, and be their friend. Then you have to give them sense of safety. Thirdly, try to satisfy their psychological needs. Be a good listener whether he or she needs to talk.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）、每处错误极其修改均仅限一词；

      2）、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'm a student from Chongqing, China. I am write to keep you informing of something about the severe situation that finless porpoises, a kind of rare and lovely animal, are facing with presently.

    It's because of human activities that finless porpoises are endangered. It's terrible that there are merely less than 1,000 finless porpoises live in China. However, it's high time that immediate measures must be taken. Don't you think so? If possible, how I hope you can help us by funding your project aiming at protecting finless porpoises! Under your financial aid, I am convinced fewer finless porpoises will survive. I would appreciate greatly if you could consider my application.

    Looking forward to your early reply.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处

    Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine，so does my life. At about 9：00 a.m.，I go to the bookstore with my friends，there was a lot of new books，I didn't know which one to buy，because these books were all use to me. At last，I chose two. At 10：00，we went to the cinema，the film calling Titanic was very popular. It took us about 3 hours to see. Having seen the film，and everyone was deeply moved. Some friends even burst out tears. From the story，I understand that love is noble and valuable. That's a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing again.

    What a happy day！I hope tomorrow I will be even happy!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last week, I taught how to ride a bike. At first, I couldn't keep my balance, so my father seizes the back of the bike. A next day, he said to me, "I think you can ride the bike by itself." Though I had told him that I needed his help, but he loosened his hands. I was scaring, and I fell off the bike. He said a few words of encourage to me and I tried again. This time, he secret loosened his hands and didn't tell me. He just ran with me with his hands on my bike. Moment later, I felt the bike shaking, but I didn't fall off. When I stopped the bike, my father was looking at me with a smile.

此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

    John was an America's artist and scientist who studies birds. He was born in Haidi and received his educate in France. He came to the USA in 1804, which he devoted nearly all his life in watching, studying and painting wild birds.

    After have completed his book, John went to England in 1826 to get it publishing.

    The beautiful of his pictures of Kentucky birds made his book Birds of America big success. And he became famous. John returned to America in 1842 and lived in New York City until his dead in 1851.