My friend Henry, with who I studied in the same class, didn't like studying at school. That's because he couldn't go to high school. He had to return back to his hometown, where his father wished him to learn to manage our small shop. However, the young man was not interesting in it and didn't do as his father said. He spends a lot of time reading and he also learned how to repair cars. Last month, I received an e-mail from him inviting me take my vacation on his hometown. I started off. Seeing that he was such successful, I said, “Henry, all road lead to Rome. You are great!”

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者从第11处起不计分。

    This winter holiday my classmates and I go to the Sunshine Welfare House for voluntary work. After we went there, we talked about how we could do for the kids over the phone. The next day, we arrived at there with gifts we had prepared, and we received a warmly welcome. Then we began to play with them. I drew picture with the older kids, and my classmates told stories to the young ones. We spent the whole afternoon with them, talked and laughing. It was getting late. We waved goodbye to him and felt delighted to able to accompany those children.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）, 并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Last month we bought our two-year-old daughter a little dog. There are not many children of her age there we live, and we thought a dog would make her feel less alone. We were right. They play together happy. Our daughter now smiles and laughs a lot more than she used. It is just like having two children in the house. All of them are very untidy, but they cry when they do not get what they want. The dog is easy to look after than my daughter. He always ate up all his food and we don't have piles of dirty clothes to wash. My wife is also happy because that I have given up smoke. The dog doesn't like the smell.

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删改或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Janice,

    It's been a month since I come to this school. I really want share with you some of the problems what I have been experiencing. I have made three new friend here. We often hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. Now I start to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you were me, would you talk to him?

    Please help with me and give me some advice.

Grace

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'm sitting in the warm night air with a cold drink in my hand and reflecting on the days. It's a day of a pure magic! I went snorkeling on the reef offshore this morning. Seen such extraordinary beauty, I think every cell in its body woke up. It was like discover a whole new dimension of life. The first thing I became aware was all the vivid colors surrounding me. And the fish don't mind me swimming among them. Therefore, there were other creatures what I didn't want to get too close to. What a tiny spot I was in this enormously world.