注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Failure is common in our life. No one can avoid them. When we fail in doing something, we often feel very depressing. Sometimes failure can make us lose hearts. So no one is willing to fail. On the contrary, success can bring us sense of pride. If one enjoys his continuous success in his career, he will have confidence to himself. Therefore, failure is the mother of success. A failure doesn't mean one can never be successfully. Those who are always afraid failure will never succeed. In a word, as long as we can get some lessons and experiences from our failure, we'll be sure to succeed.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I left home at 17 and pay my own way through college.In the past 20 years,I have worked for everything I needed.So it shocks me what some people in their 20s,still get their life supported by our parents.Some of these parents have difficult supporting their families.

    It's true that the job market is much more harder these days.Therefore,there are certainly some ways to make living on our own.Even if our parents is nice enough to pay for our college,we shouldn't burden them with our problems.We should be financial responsible adults,made our parents proud of us.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It was sunny last Saturday. I determined buy two novels and some magazines, though I went to a bookstore with my four-year-old sister Jenny. There are lots of people in the crowd bookstore. There I saw my friend Lisa. As we hadn't seen each other for a long time, we talked for a while. When I said goodbye to Lisa, I couldn't find Jenny at all. She got missing! I was so worried that I called her names “Jenny” again and again, but anybody answered. About fifteen minutes late, I found my sister in an only toy shop near the bookstore. A shop assistant (售货员) was played with her. Thank for God!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多改（从第11处起）不计分。

    Recently, with more and more people own private cars, more traffic accidents are reported.

    As it is well known, traffic accidents have been a heated topic because the number of traffic accidents are increasing. The main reason is driving before drinking. Therefore, running the red light and drag-racing in cities are the causes. As the result, more and more traffic accidents had happened.

    In my opinion, if we want to reduce accidents, we should take actions. For example, drivers should be punished severe without mercy. At the same time, the government should educate people to obey traffic rules. Only when we reduce traffic accidents we live a happier life.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

    Last weekend, we watched an excited basketball match in our school. It is between Grade 1 and Grade 2 students. During the match, the players from all teams played very hard. Grade 2 was stronger. However, to our surprised, Grade 1 won at last. The player jumped and hugged celebrate their success. Just then, the players from the other team that came near and said “Congratulations!” to them. They worn smiles on their faces and you couldn't tell from their expressions that they lost the match. We were touching by the scene and felt what important a role sport plays in daily life.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^ )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Mr. Li,

    Long time no see! I'm glad to tell you that I have made a great progress in my English study since I become a senior high school student. When I started senior English in the beginning, I found much more difficult than that we learned in junior school and I almost lost heart. Later, I realized the importance of English, so I got up early every morning, kept recited English words, listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercises. Besides, I also asked my teachers and classmates of better ways of learning English. Now, I'm improving my English a lot. And I'm getting more and more interest in learning it. Thank you so much for your greatly help in your class.

    All the best wish to you.

Yours,

Li Hua