增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Volunteering has meaningful effect on your community.But it can also have many benefit for you.

    To begin with,volunteering enable you to gain some valuable experience,that lays a solid foundation for your future life.In the meantime,by volunteering,you can make many friends,from whom you can obtain use knowledge that can't be learnt it at school.On addition,volunteering provides you with a good opportunity to give back to society, thus a harmonious society can be create.

    As far as I'm concerned,volunteering is a very good way to build self-confidence,too.When offered others help, we will have a sense of satisfaction and will be in good mood.However,volunteering is of great benefit not only to others but also to ourselves.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    This summer, I attended a journalism-themed summer camp, where I learn a lot.

    I was deeply impressed by the interviews carrying out in the streets. In the beginning, I wasn't used to talk to strangers. But under the help of my teammates, I was able to communicate smooth with them. Then we were noticed most of the answers that we got were brief. Before we discussed the problem, my teammates and I realized that it was because the questions weren't open-ended enough. So we changed their questions and our interviewees were more willing to share with us their ideas in end.

    From this experience, I've gained several skill for interviewing people as a journalist.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I am very luckily to have the opportunity to see so many place, but sometimes I experience culture shock when I see or do something new. Dad and I now are travelled through Denmark, Norway and Sweden. I used to thinking that these countries are the same, but not any more. People in Denmark are a bit of friendlier, while Norwegians and Swedes prefer not to talk to strangers. I'm surprised to learn that many people there speak English in addition their national languages. In Sweden, it seems that anyone has golden hair and blue eyes. I feel a little strange with my black hair and dark eyes. I imagine this is that foreigners feel when they visit China!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Among different kind of sports, swimming is my favorite. It was a very excited experience to learn swimming with my parents when I am five years old.

Swimming is a real good sport. It makes me feeling relaxed. This sport can make me stay health and strong, so I exercise almost every part of my body every time I go swimming.

    Before going to swim, we should pay attention three points. The first is to make your body in a better state. The second is that you shouldn't eat too many. The last is that you'd better swim with some friends. These can help you stay safe and enjoy ourselves.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Ms Smith,

    I am Li Hua. I am writing to ask for a several­hour leave. I was to give a speech to welcome a group of American visiting teachers on Wednesday morning. I am terrible sorry to tell you that I can't come to attend at your class. How a pity! Perspectives on American Literature are always my favourite course. I do hope you can excuse my absent. As to the lessons to be missing, I wonder if it is possible for them to recorded so that I can listen to them later. Or I will just read my classmate's notes and making them up as soon as possible.

    Your permission will be appreciated. Thank a lot!

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last week, our yearly school sports meeting is held and the students of our class took an active part in it. On the first day, we watched the impressive opening ceremony performing by energetic teachers and students. Soon, the games formally began. Some of my classmate ran to the track to cheer for the athletes while others remained seated, watching them from a distance. I was exciting because they would compete in the 100-meter dash with my classmates cheering. Fortunately, I fell on the ground, missing the chance to win. What a pity! Although I failed, but I was still looking forward a better performance the next day. However, as the result of the rain, we had to put off the sports meeting, that made us disappointed.