增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Saturday, my parents and I paid visit to my grandparents by train. There was a large number of people in the crowded train, but everyone help those who had lots of baggage and behaved politely. Along the way, we enjoyed beautifully views. At first, we saw one hill after another. Then what came into our eye were fields with green crops. In a six-hour trip, we arrived at my grandparents' house. Exhausted though I felt, but I was happy to see my grandparents, which I hadn't seen for a long time. It's really an excited trip because it was the first time I had taken so a long-distance train.

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 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号    ，并在其下面写出该加的词。

 删除：把多余的词用斜线  \  划掉。

 修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：

每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three. They all work hard but they have different learning method. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher.As a result,he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him much time to finish his homework.But he has to stay up late and doesn't get enough sleep.However,Wang Ying has quite the different way of learning.She listens attentive and tries to catch everything that the teacher said in class.Because this,she spends less time doing her homework,which makes it is possible for her to go to bed early.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Li Hua,

    I am honored that you would ask me for some advices. As you know, our band was formed in a very unusual way. However, we learned a lot about be a band since then.

    First, you should think careful about what kind of music you want to write and play. You had better play one kind of music if you want to become famous. Next, you can come up to a name for your band—something which is different. Then, make a special time for practicing but stick to it. I will also need to give several performances for friends and family to get their ideas on your musical ability.

    Above all, just have a fun. I believe it will be an amazed experience for you.

Yours Sincerely,

Freddy

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

Dear Editor,

    I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market. After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale. Lucky, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital. After several hours' treatment they finally escaped of death.

    As some businessmen are only interested in making money to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures or which happens to buyers. They must be have charged by law. Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Are home visits necessary when they are so many ways to communicate with the students' parent? Some people are for home visits. They thought home visits will make it easily for parents and teachers to communicate and work more closely to help students learn. Home visits will give teachers a chance to better understanding their students. Besides, others think it is a waste of the time and energy to pay home visits. If they keep on touch with the students' parents with text messages, QQ or E-mails, it will be more convenient and save a lot of time. Personally, I think home visits is positive, and teachers can educate their students effectively through home visits.