增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\） 划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Jack，

    I'm sorry to hear that you feel lonely in the new school, because you find hard to make friends. Now, I'd like to offer you some advices. Firstly, it's normal of you to feel lonely because you are living in a new environment. Secondly, you should greet your classmates when met them on campus. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you take an actively part in class activities, what can help them learn more about you. I believe you will be able to make new friends soon unless you're friendly to the others.

    I hope the above suggestions will be helpful to you or everything will be fine with you in the future.

Yours，

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Abby,

    How are you? Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you. I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. One hundred and twenty students took exam for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. However, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel lonely. They can't imagine a girl so young live alone. They ask me study in the capital instead. Then I'll be able to continue living with them. How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up?

Best wishes,

Jane

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Jim arrived in home and discovered that he has forgotten his door key. He rang the bell, but nobody came to open the door. He rang again and waiting, but still there was not reply. He walked round the house to see if he could find the open window, but they were all locked. It was beginning to rain, he did not know how to do. Kate, his wife, had obvious gone out. He didn't know where she had gone or when she would return. Finally, picked up a stone, he threw them at the kitchen window. Just then, his wife came back.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Ann,

    I am so surprising to know from you're letter that you re upset so your parents don't allow you to surf the Internet. Here are some suggestions on how to solve your problem.

    First, you should communicate with your parents, letting me know that surfing the Internet do not mean wasting time. On the contrary, it does good for your study. Second, I suggested that you should make a timetable to control your time spend in surfing the Internet. Besides, explain to your parents that the Internet also has good effect on study.

    As we all know it, parents love us very much. I believe you can solve your problem and make greatly progress in your study.

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Yesterday, in the Palace Museum, I met a young student, that came from the USA. It was first time that I had met a foreigner, so I went to greet her in; English. He told me that he was a college student travel in China and he liked China very much. I volunteered to show him around to the museum. He was impressed by the Chinese buildings and busy taking photo all the time. He said he hadn't seen so beautiful buildings before. After that, we go boating on a lake but had a good time together. I was very glad to have the chance to improve my speaking English.