①In addition, sometimes I am very clumsy and drop things or bump into furnitures.

②Pudong Development Zone is no longer that it used to be.

③The capital of Peru is Lima, that is in the north on the coast.

④But monitoring carefully, the snakes proved to be no trouble and all went according to plan.

⑤Would you like to introduce your new published book to us?

⑥They urged that the gym was kept open during the work time.

⑦I came up this book in an old bookstore several days ago.

⑧Mum can't have Peter stay up all night long.

⑨Just accept them for who they are, and give them encouragement to live as rich and full life as you do.

⑩Every time when I returned after an absence, I felt stupid because I was behind the others.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than praised by my teacher before my classmates. Never will I forget one experience in an English class last year.

I felt extreme nervous the instant the class began. Mr. Zhang might announce the exam result and I would probably get scolding as before. Surprisingly, when entering the classroom, he glanced at us, saying gently, “Today, I won't talk about the exam, but I am excited to tell you what Li Jia wrote an excellent English article in the exam.” At hearing what he said, I was so excited that I couldn't hold back my tear. It was the first time that I have got praised. From then on, I fell in love with the English. I'm grateful to Mr. Zhang. Without her praise, I couldn't have gone such far in my English study.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词尾（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It was a freezing winter night. I pulled myself along the way before a long day's work stand behind the counter. An empty stomach and only ten-dollar note and a few pennies in the pocket, my life seemed hopelessly. Despite the warm Christmas atmosphere, my heart was frozen to dead. “Excuse me, Madam. Would you please be too kind as to give a few pennies? The little angels will appreciate for it.” A sweet voice rise behind me. I turned and found a plain-looking girt with two abandoned dogs. Without hesitations, I handed over the note in my pocket. Cheerfully the girl wait away and she would never know how she saved my day and my life.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last summer vacation, I spent two week at my aunt's. She lived in the small mountain village, with a river ran nearby. Early one morning, I wanted to swim in the river, which some women villagers were washing clothes. I find a good place for swimming and I was just about to jump into the river while there came a cry, “Help! Help!” I looked the direction of the cry and I found that a little boy had been fallen into the river. I rushed over without delay, jumped into the water and swam quick towards the boy. Holding on to her over the water, I struggled to the bank. At last, the boy was saved

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

    Last week, I went to a painting exhibition. Upon enter the gallery, I put on the earphones which would give me informations of all the paintings. Suddenly, I noticed that the elderly woman who didn't know how to use the earphones stood anxiously in front of a painting. I rushed to her with hesitation but helped her put on the earphones. The woman thanks me for my kindness. I realized that was reaching out to others that could really bring a great moment of happiness, which was benefit to me so much. That day when I appreciated lots of breathtaking paintings. What's more, I learned a valuable lesson from the grateful smile giving by the elderly woman.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词