Last night, when watched the annual Ten People Who Moved Chinese the Most in the CCTV, I learn some deeds of helping the poor children. It makes me have a firm belief what there are still many kind but generous people around us. It is common believed that many children in the remote mountainous areas of our country have few opportunity to receive education for various reasons. Now that we have the chance receive a good education, we should treasure them. As far as I'm concerned about, if we are friendly and help each other, we can live harmonious and happy life together.

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注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'm glad to hear of you. As for living at home and living in your school dormitory, I think you'd better to choose the latter. First of all, living in a dormitory will develop your ability of living independently and solve problems by yourself. Secondly, if you live there, you will find easier to share feelings with your friends; in all, you are of the same age and have common feelings towards many thing. Most important, living with your friends will improve your team spirit, that will be beneficial to your future career.

    I hope you can consider my advice seriously and then make you final decision.

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修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

    My first trip to the zoo was years before during an elementary school field trip. It is an activity I still remembered to this day. It was for the first time that I had found me so close to animals like tigers and lions. I would say that the trip was worth every minute of time spending. However, some feel that animals should not be kept in cages, and should rather be let out in the wild. They think keeping animal in cages shows the cruel of human beings. As far as I concerned, without zoos, many of us would never have the chance to see how a tiger or lion really looks like.

增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第l1处起）不计分。

    Smart-phone apps certainly make our life easier. And now, it look like they could even do our homework for us. Recent years have seen the release of a variety of study aid apps aimed at student. Most of these apps allow users take a photo of our schoolwork and the correct answers will just appear on their smart-phones. Although they are conveniently, these apps present problems to both parents but teachers. Most students just copy the answers from the app, while only a few use the app to study. Better still, some students even use the study aid apps as social networks. But, this isn't to say that study aid apps should be completely banned. Parents and teachers should give necessary guidance to help students take the advantage of the study aid apps' strengths and avoiding their weaknesses.

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修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport .We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.

It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.

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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    We are going to have a Chinese lesson in the school book bar next week. Considered we students are now busy preparing for it, I suggest to reading some articles about Tang Dynasty in advance. The mainly aim of our lesson is to learn the poetry of Tang Dynasty. That is universally acknowledged that the poetry of Tang Dynasty is one of the solid foundation of our culture. A number of talented poets showed their views the society. They also expressed their appreciation of the beautiful of our motherland. Through the lesson, we can broaden our horizons but have a better knowledge of our colorful culture. Knowing the history of Tang Dynasty are beneficial to all of us. If you have time, welcome to our book bar that we will have the Chinese lesson.