增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear David,

    I'm happy that you're interesting in our flea market and here is a brief of introduction of it.

    To raise students' aware of making the most of used things, the Students' Union held a flea market on campus recent. The event attracted a crowd from the whole school, who come here to sell, purchase or swap used goods with their schoolmate. On the market, you could find vary things, from second-hand textbooks, magazines to CDs, bikes or clothes at a lower price.

    In my opinion, the flea market not only provides a platform save resources but also helps students learn some practical skills, where may be useful for their future job hunting.

                                                                                                                                   Yours,

                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线(), 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    On a Sunday morning, I got on a bus and found a seat near the back, and then I noticed a man seating in the front. He was pretended that a tiger toys was real and giving it a voice. He must be mentally disabled.

    Behind him were other people to who he was trying to talk, but after some minutes he walked away and sat near me, looking annoyed.

    I didn't want to be laughed for talking to him but I didn't feel like leaving him on his own either.

    After a while I rise from my seat and walked to the front of the bus. I sat next to the man but introduced myself. We had an amazingly conversation. He got off the bus before me and I felt very much happy the rest of the way home.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Life is a mystery and we will never know that is waiting for us. But one thing is for sure: problems are unavoidable. For us, it's the process of solving problems that help us grow.

    Making a speech in public used to make me frightening. With a strong accent and terrible pronunciation, I failed in speech competition many times, but I didn't lose my heart. I was admitted by the school speech club. I considered it a good chance for me to improve myself. With a help of others, I recorded my speech, listening to it and corrected my pronunciation. Now I am confident enough to give my best speech to you all.

    Don't afraid of problems, but make use of it to be the best of ourselves!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Last Friday，our class have a discussion about which to do during the coming holiday．Some are in favor of staying at home．They think it's both convenience and comfortable．Beside，they can save money for other purpose．But they will lose the chance of getting to know outside world．Others，on the other hand，would rather to go traveling since it can increase our knowledge．Therefore，they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling．

    Personally，I'd like to stay at home，for I can do whatever I like，such as reading books，watching TV，or helping my parents on the housework．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    With the College Entrance Examination approaching, many students are so worried about it to fall asleep at night and even suffer from mentally illness.It's a fairly common phenomena among us students.Here is some effective methods for you to adopt.

    First of all, you should spend a plenty of time prepare for the test.Secondly, it is no need to feel nervous when you have some bad emotions.I think take a deep breath is a helpful way to reduce your stress.Last but not least, you ought to believe yourself and keep a good state of mind.

    Follow my tips, or you will overcome your exam anxiety.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

March 1^st

Sunny

    Today I heard of my friend Li Mei. In her letter, she asks me about my dream job. After think for a long time, I am determined to become the teacher.

    I'd like to stay at school with students. The class is real like a big family, who can make me feel warm. Also it's fantastic to see us students become great people when they finally grow. What's more, teachers have summer and winter vacation. Therefore, I can have enough time to travel around the world.

    Beautiful as my future is, but I must work harder to get good grades and attend a famous college in order to achieve my goal.