增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜钱（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只充许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Diana,

    Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind tor you to let us bring Anne's friend. Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park Gina nearly got knocked over as a car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    People often come up across the word ＂SOHO＂ in the newspaper or magazine. But not everyone knows how it means. As the matter of fact, ＂SOHO＂ means ＂Small Office/ Home Office＂. Now many people use computer, so it is possible for you to work at their homes. They needn't go to offices. They can usually work fast and better at home. By work at home, they save a lot of time and energy. They needn't spend time on the road but they won't feel tired or angry because the bad traffic. Maybe in the future, more and more people would be＂SOHO＂ workers.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad.He always gives me some advice,but I seldom took them seriously.One day he was encouraged me to participate in a speech competition.So I signed up and after the competition,I did my best to be full prepared.But the moment I stood on the stage,I was such nervous that my mind completely went blank. The experience of lose a competition was really painful.Then,my dad said,"My son,life is like battlefield.You have to lose many time to win the final victory."Thanks for his advice,I never give up when I do anything.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉（\）。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    As is well-known that birds are our friends. However, the large number of birds are killed for food every year, that really causes more and more people to be worried. The other day I was walking in the woods while a shot was heard. Heard the shot, the birds in the trees flew in all directions. A bird was badly injured and looked sadly. Finding the bird injured, so I decided to take them home. At home I take good care of it. When it recovered, I returned it to the woods. I hope something should done to protect birds from being killed.

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity. Others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    In the past, very few foreigners visited the south foot of the Himalayas. Later, many Japanese went there because the honesty of a small boy.

    One day, some Japanese photographers asked a locally boy to buy some bottles of beer, which took the boy three hours. The next day, the boy volunteered to help him and one of the photographers gave him lots of money. But the boy didn't return back on time. The third night, the boy knocked at the doors of the photographer, telling him that he bought four bottles of beer at one store, climbing a mountain and crossed a river to buy another six. On the way back, three bottles was broken. He cried and brought the broken pieces to the photographer but gave him the change.

    The people there were moving. Then more travelers came to the place.