增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    The person that we should learn needn't be rich or famous. It can be a person we live with. For I, it's my father. I still remembered the days when I was a child. Although he had plenty of works to do, he still stayed with me but played games with me. With time gone by, I'm in Senior 3 now. It is I who has no time to stay with him now! However, he is still behind me and tries his best to make it a better life for our family. What selfless he is! I am very gratefully to him. He is not only my father, but also a hero living with me!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My parents and I stayed at the Shangri-La Hotel for a week when we visit Suzhou last month. It is in the downtown area, and it is easy go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.

    We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Suzhou. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.

    It is so a great hotel that I will recommend it to any friend of mine, that is going to Suzhou.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第l1处起）不计分。

    Volunteering is one way to turn something you have - time- into a means to help others.

    Last Friday, we spent a few hours volunteer at the local science center. Our teacher divided us to two groups. One group picks up trash in the exhibition hall. But the other group went outside and pulled up weeds. The employees we helped were very appreciative, and invited us to coming back anytime. Tomorrow, we will go to the homeless shelter in our town where the homeless can have meal and sleep. We will cook meals for who is staying there. Although all of us have had the experience of cooking before, everyone wants to have try.

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： ⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    In recent years, the fish population in the ocean has been facing with a severe situation with the quantity of fish and their species drop sharply.

    It is human behavior which is to blame. Industrial and agriculture waste such as chemicals and oil is poured into the ocean. What's the worse, over fishing destroys the balance of life in the ocean. To handle this situation, the government should make laws but punish those who break the law. Besides, over fishing should be strict banned. Also, many fisherman can take other jobs so that there have less people living on fishing.

    Only by taking these measures we eventually preserve fishing resources.

    Today I took part in the Beijing Foreign Language Festival with my friend Li Ming. We arrive there by bike in the morning. First we attended to a lecture introduced good methods of learning English. The audience all listened but took notes carefully. Then we went to the English Corner, there lots of people were talking with foreigners in small group. Li Ming and I joined them with greatly interest. That was amazing to find myself talking with the native speaker and we got on quite well. Time passed quickly. Before leaving, we bought some books and dictionaries. The festival gave you a good chance to practice my English.