增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1． 每处错误仅限1词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    With the progress of society, the volunteer spirit has spread all over a country. More and more people are willing to be volunteer and take part in volunteer activities. Get involved in volunteer work means a lot to our society. Firstly, you show loving care for others when you are doing voluntary service. You pass love and civilization on to others with their volunteer work, and make others feel that there are always people care about them. This made our society more harmonious. Secondly, people whom you help may influenced by your good deeds and follow your lead. In a result, all people may help and care about each other, or the world will become a better place to live in. Since volunteer work is so meaningfully, we should call on more people to take part in it actively.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的单词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    In the past when batteries in the electrical equipments in my house ran out, I would just put them in the garbage bag. Last week I learned from magazine that one battery could possible pollute 16 thousand liters of water. It is deeply shocked that a battery can be so a pollutant. Then I came up to an idea. I decided to transform one of my shoe boxes into a battery recycling box. Then I put them in front of our apartment building. To my delighted, the box was filled up in a couple days. Then I call the recycling center to collect the batteries. The staff spoke highly of all what I did.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last summer holiday, I paid visit to Hong Kong with my father. To their surprise, we found the streets were not as wide as those in our city. The bus and cars were running very fast. The sidewalks were always crowding because many visitors went there every day. The people there were friendly, and when we were asked them for help, they were willing to help us. We take many photos there and then we shared them on WeChat Moments（朋友圈）. We also bought some gifts there for much things were sold for a discount. It's so hardly to say goodbye to Hong Kong. We hope to go there once more unless we have chances.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

    Cherry, whom is about 5 or 6 years old, is my favorite pet. About three years before, Cherry showed up at our house. I have just lost my cat and was very sadly, so I didn't plan to owning another pet. At first, we ignored her. We were getting ready leave for a vacation. My two daughter kept wanting us to keep her and fed her behind my back. Finally I had to tell them if he was still here when we got back, we would keep her. I was sure a dog would move on. Guess what? When we got back from vacation, but the dog was still around. It seemed like an angel had send her to us.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Animals are our friend. As students, what should we do to protect from animals?

    Firstly, we mustn't litter, that is the easiest way to helping protect the environment. Littering increase the damage to animals' habitats. Secondly, persuading our parents not to buy jewelry made of ivory and clothing made of animals' fur. That will also help protecting animals. Thirdly, it's necessary to make more people realize importance of protecting animals. Lastly, be brave to stop those who harm animals.

    I believe that if we all try their best, animals will be protected good.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词）

注意1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Dear John,

    Next month I would go to Beijing to take part in the students English speech contest. I find it easily to remember English words as well as the grammar rules. However, what worries me a lot of is that I am really having trouble in use language. Sometime I cannot express myself with proper English. Would you please do me a favor? I would appreciate that if you can give me some advices on how to solve these problems. By way, I will call you when the competition is over. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua