文中共有10处语言错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sally，

    Now I'd like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency. The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own. I've come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I'll never waste money and learn to share worry to my parents. I've learnt how to get along well with others. What's worse, I've gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can't be learnt from textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In the word, I had a wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2 .只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Mark Twain, one of the best-known American writer in the 19th century, who was born in Missouri. His hometown lie on the banks of the Mississippi River, there he spent his childhood. When he grew up, he worked like a pilot on a river boat for some time. Mark Twain is his pen name. He took it from the shout of the sailors measure the depth of the water. Mark Twain wrote a lot of novels, but one of them is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer. It brought his fame and honor. Some of his writings have translated into many languages. He and his works are deep loved by readers throughout the world.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    On November 12, 2017, the student in our class paid visit to China Science and Technology Museum.

    At 8:00, we left to China Science and Technology Museum by bus. At 8:30, a guide introduced it to us briefly and told us that what we should pay attention to during we visit. Ten minutes late, we began our visit. Some students took notes carefully as they visited. All the students were amazing at the rapidly achievements in science and technology. Three hours has gone by before we knew it. At 11:30, we returned to our school.

    This visit no only broadened my outlook but also aroused my interest in science and technology.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It is a joke of the fire alarm. When Sophie was cleaning the blackboard after his class ended last night, the fire alarm went off. The alarm was sounded like the busy signal on the phone, but 1,000 times loud. Instead of leave the building, she walked about to see that the problem was. The school seemed to be empty. Then she walked by one room, but saw about seven students inside. She told everyone to leave immediate, and after almost five minutes, both of them left the building. Then a school police office arrived the school and walked around the area. He said it was a false alarm and used his key to turn down the alarm.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I had an amazed experience last Spring Festival. On the second day of the holiday, it was snowing heavily but we had a very important relative to visit, which lived in a distant mountain village. We had to taking risks to drive on our journey. The road was bad, but they arrived safely.

The family welcomed us warm. We were treated with good dinner. Later in the afternoon, after saying goodbye, we start back home.

    Sadly, our car was stuck in the snow halfway and wouldn't moved. Just then, two villager walked by and offered to push our car. Their helping us out of made our trip unforgettable.