假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

    My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework. Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.

    My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Peter,

    I'm writing to tell you something about e-hongbao, that is very popular in China.

    E-hongbao is actual a kind of lucky money from and to relatives and friends during festivals or in special occasions. For many young people, grabbing e-hongbao on our mobile phones is a fairly exciting activity. Unlike the tradition of elders give lucky money to children, over half of the people sending e-hongbao is in their 20s. It's just for fun but giving best wishes, while the sum of money matters a little. In a word, e-hongbao is bringing new color to the old tradition.

    Now I'm concerned about the safe of online payment, and rules and regulations needed to be improved to guarantee its operation.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    Nowadays Senior 3 students are general faced a lot of pressure,which is rather common.To reduce it,the followed suggestions may help.First of all,know exactly what lead to your pressure,and then you can take measures to deal with it.Secondly,set up a goal what is not too high.In other words,don't put too much pressure on yourself. Thirdly,find a way to relax you occasionally.For example,you can listen to music,go swim or just simply go walking. Eventually,make friend with others,for example,your classmates,your teachers or your parents.They will understand you and come to you help when you are really in the trouble.In a word,never get yourself stuck in the pressure for "Impossible is nothing".

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    A good student will always make a proper study plan, with which he can study more effective.

    There was once a time I listened to the teacher carefully in class and always did my homework on time. Every day I was as busy as a bee. I had no free time. Therefore, I had a few after-school activities. However, I couldn't understand that I didn't get good marks. So I asked my headteacher Mr. Li with help. He advised me to have a proper study pan make. I took her advice. After I stick to the plan for a month, I made rapid progresses. What made me even happy was that I had much more time to develop my own interests.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last weekend, I went to visit my English teacher, who was already in his fifty. He gives me a lot of help when I was a junior middle school student. Delighting to see me, he asked my senior middle school life. Then he advised me to make fully preparations for the coming entrance examination. It was so a pleasure to see him again that I didn't notice it was pretty later. I had to say goodbye to each other.

    He is not only a good teacher but my close friend. Wherever I will go, I will always treasure a lime that I spent with my teacher.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Three years ago, I was chosen by my classmate to take part an English speech competition. When go up to the stage, I felt nervous. At the once, my mother's words came to me, "If you want to succeed, it costs nothing and self-confidence." Since I had the chance to standing here, it meant that I had the ability. I said to myself, "Have you forgotten that you have prepared for this competition for a longer time? You are the best. "Strange, my nervousness disappeared. I spoke very fluently that all the audience cheers after my speech. I was successful!