增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It was on a warm autumn day that my father and I walk into my new high school. After visited the classroom, the volunteer took us to the dormitory. Altogether I had five roommates, two of which arrived later. I got to know my new roommate immediately. Although I was quite unwilling to say "goodbye" to my father, but he had to leave to my hometown by train in the evening. It sudden hit me that I had grown up and I had to look after me and live independently. Only then I realize my senior high school life had really begun.

    Last week, I took a part in an English speech contest. There are twelve students in the final contest. I was one of the lucky student. Fifteen minutes after my turn, I picked my topic and prepared for it. I wrote down the outlines and organized what I was going to say. However, when I stood in front all the judges and students, I was extreme nervous. Then I took a deep breath to relax me and started my speech. The result was not good, because I regarded it as a challenge, which process was the most important.

    Having learnt a lot from the contest, I am sure I will do it much well next time.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Recently I have read a article written by Susan Beacham. She thinks if or not a gift is suitable lies not in its value and in the giver's heart. And she also thinks the giver should devote time and energy to the gift. I agree with him, whose article reminds me my best gift. It is a pen given by my devoting father. He doesn't earn many money. When I was in junior middle school, my father had bought me the nice pen. He wished me to study hardly. Since then, the pen has become my best friend, encouraging me to make great progresses.

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

    As we all know, over seventy percent of our planet are covered by sea, where is rich in salt as well as fish. What's more, there is a great deal of oil or gas under the sea. In other words, the sea is the place with so many important things we live in. However, with the world population increased rapidly, overfishing has become a serious problem. Every day a lot of rubbishes and waste water are poured into the sea, so the sea is bad polluted. As a result, the number of fish has obviously decreased. Besides, some are dying out or have been died out. Therefore, it is time for everybody protect the sea.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    As we all know, the skin is a essential part of our body. We have three layers of skin acting as a barrier against disease. So if our skin gets burning, how can we give first aid treatment?

    First of all, remove clothing using a pair of scissor if necessary. Second, it is best to place burns under gentle running water for about 10 minutes. Third, cover the burned area with a dry bandage won't stick to the skin. Holding the bandage in place with tape. If burns are on arms or legs, keep it higher than the heart. If burns were on the face, the victim should to sit up. If the injuries are second or third degree burns, it is vital to get the victim to the doctor and hospital immediately.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（ 从第11处起）不计分。

    All the students of Zhongshan High School is going to visit Peking University in two days. Apart the students, some of their teacher will also join in it. They will set off at about 7:00 am and returned at about 4:00 pm. In the morning, we will visit the mainly campus of Peking University. In a afternoon, they will have a direct conversation with some freshmen of the university which just graduated from Zhongshan High School. What is believed that this activity will help the students hive a good knowledge of campus life in advance, and make them to work hard to achieve their dreams in the near future.