增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I took our foreign teacher Mr. Brown, he came to China for the first time, to the Great Wall in last weekend. Having told about the history of the Great Wall, he was amazing at this world wonder. He was struck by the beautiful of the Great Wall. So I took photo of him, which would be a good memory for him. At the top, Mr. Brown was very interested in the activity of protecting the environment that he was eager to join in and then sign his name. Both the Great Wall or the Chinese people deep impressed him. He decided to visit more places of interest when free.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last week, experienced a tough interview, Joan was fortunate to be employed as an interpreter at the National Museum, where lies in Washington. She was excited that in addition a variety of exhibitions the museum was in the possession of wonderful treasures. However, Joan doubted that she would be on good term with her new colleagues. Her new director invited her to give a short self introduction. She feels such nervous that she couldn't say a word. Besides, all her new colleagues encouraged her. Eventually, she made this. A good beginning is half done.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    As we all know, it's great pleasure to study in a beautiful environment that you can breathe in fresh air and enjoy birds singing. To create a more beautiful campus, every one of us should make it our duty to protect the environment. Here is my suggestions for you.

    To begin with, it is better for us to walk or ride a bicycle to school because cars produced carbon dioxide, which contributes to the global warming. Also, we should never forget to turn of the lights and the taps when we don't use them. Besides, we are expected it to take good care of the plants in our campus and get rid of the bad habit of throw rubbish everywhere. Last but not least, it is vital for us to recycle as many as possible.

    All in all, do keep in mind that our contribution are of value in keeping our campus more tidy and beauty.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Nowadays, it is more and more difficulty for people to find jobs. Even graduates from key universities can't find out suitable jobs. Here was some advice for those graduates.

    Firstly, as an university graduate, you must know well about yourself, your knowledge, your ability and your hobbies including. Secondly, you'd better study about the job you want to do, what will be helpful to us in finding a good job. Thirdly, get ready for your interview carefully that you can behave well. Besides, introducing yourself to others properly and show your advantages to them are necessary. God is always to provide chances with those who are prepared.