增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

    修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I want to be a teacher when I listen to my teacher carefully. I think I can be a teacher when I grow up. I can help many students learn things well. I can play with my students, either. So we are well friends. I want to be a doctor when I see many doctors to save their patients. To be a doctor is really great. I think I can be a doctor when grown up. Then I can help many people out of danger. I will be by far the happy girl in the world. I want to be a reporter when I watched TV every evening. We can get lots of important informations from them. They make the world smaller and also make us happy. I would like to being a reporter when I grow up. And I can learn a lot about China and the other countries around world. I can meet many superstars so well. I have lots of dreams. I think my dreams can come true one day, because there's an old saying “where there is a will, there is a way.”

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

3).格式错，不计分。

Dear Ms Jenkins,

    I'm Li Hua from your English writing class in last term.I'm writing to ask for your help.I'm applied for a part-time job in my city during the summer vacation,advertise by a foreign company.And I had just completed my application letter and resume.Besides,I am not quite sure of the language and the format I've used.Because I know you have a very tightly schedule,I need your timely help.I'd appreciate if you could spend some time going through them and made necessary changes.You can find my application letter and resume in the attachment.

    Thank you for your kind!

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： l）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    There is a tradition in my family. On New Year's Eve, all my relative will come to our house for a feast. As matter of fact, it isn't the food that bring us together but the sense of belonging does. Making dumplings was always great fun. We put a coin into one of the dumplings. Everybody expects to eat the one with the coin inside, because it is said whomever gets the coin will have a good fortune in the followed year. When my mom serves the dumplings, they help ourselves immediately, hoping to get the good luck of our entirely year. The coin never comes to me, and I am pretty sure of that the luck is always there.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧）,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I am a comic fan and one of the book I like best is the Adventures of Tintin wrote by Herge. I have loved the book since I first read it as kid. Tintin was a very brave and kind boy. He always catches bad guys and help people in need. I really admire her colorful life travelling around the world. The boy, which was born in the comic book in 1929, turns 90 this year. But the first Tintin shop was opened this February in Shanghai to celebrate his ninetieth birthday. I'm looking forward to paying a visit to there this summer vacation. How excited it will be to buy lovely Tintin products!