增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；  2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。

Dear Sir,

    How are everything going? I am writing to tell you that I have made a lot of progresses. But I would prefer to moving into a single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient(不便的) to share a room with others. My roommate often held parties at night, making much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturbs me a lot. So I hope to draw your attention to this problem. I am surely you will agree that the only solution for I is to get a room of my own, one not in the same building and as near to the school campus as possible. I would appreciate very much if you could do me the favor.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2．只允许修改5处，多者（从第6处起）不计分。

    If you say the word “communication”, most people think words and sentences. Although these are very important, but we communicate with more than just spoken and writing words. Indeed, body positions are part of that we call “body language”. We see examples of unconscious body language very often, yet there is also “learned” body language, which vary from culture to culture.

增加：在缺漏词的地方加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处

    Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m.，I go to the bookstore with my friends, there was a lot of new books，I didn't know which one to buy，because these books were all use to me. At last, I chose two. At 10:00，we went to the cinema, the film calling Titanic was very popular. It took us about 3 hours to see. Having seen the film, and everyone was deeply moved. Some friends even burst out tears. From the story, I understand that love is noble and valuable. That's a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing again.

    What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happy!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Saturday I took bike trip to the nature park together with three of my friends in the breeze (微风), there we went for sighting. In the forest, we saw a number of plant and knew a lot about them. And then we go to a patch of grass that was full of wild flowers. We lay in the sun quietly, enjoyed the fresh air. The sight was very amazing that we didn't want to leave. We talked about our experiences happy and played several childhood games. Later, we had photos taken together and rode back to home.

    It was really an unforgettable weekend because they learned a lot about plants. With addition, we relaxed ourselves by enjoying the beauty of nature.