增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下写出该词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

Dear Mandy，

    I'm not doing well in my lessons at school, especial in maths. My dad says I must try hard because he wants me go to university. He thinks I'm lazy，but it's not true. I work really hard,often study late into the night! I've tried to talk to my mother，but she always said I have to work as hard like my brother does. My brother doesn't study very hard，and he always gets excellent grades. It's not fair! The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says I'm the best student she's had for year. When I told my dad，all he said was，“ You mustn 't waste your time in art. You must focus your mind on your lessons! ”I'm feeling quite puzzling as to what to do now. Would you please help me out?

    Thanks a lot!

Yours sincerely，

Lisa

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Dear David,

    I am Lihua, a senior high school students. I have recently learnt on the Internet what you are helping students with spoken English by offer an online course. I am writing to ask you for some help.

    I have been learnt English for more than four years and I really like English. However, my spoken English is such poor that I can not communicate with foreigners free. My broken English always discourages you from opening my mouth. I am really worrying. I hope you can help me with my spoken English. I believe that I can make a progress with your help.

    I would appreciate it if you could agree help me. I am looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely,

Lihua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Tom,

    How is everything going recently? That has been a long time since we meet in China last time. Having passed the finally exams, I am busy planning a two-weeks trip to the US during this summer holiday. Do you have any suggestions about the choice of America cities? I prefer big and modern cities. I guess I'd better to book a hotel. What is the price for single boy like myself? Is it easy to find Chinese food? What is the traffic like, after I travel between cities in the US? Hope to hearing from you. Thank you!

    Best regards!

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I couldn't believe my ears when I heard my name calling. I was chosen to play the leading role in the play，that was my dream. As a shy and thin girl，I used to be quite afraid of speaking in the public. But my parents and teachers always encourage me to do so. Now I have changed great. In class，I am often the first one to stand up and answer questions even if I may take some mistakes. No pains，no gains. Now I am always brave enough overcome the difficulty in my heart and have changed in a lively girl. So my experience shows that we should not be afraid of losing face but only in this way can we make progresses.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。

    In the summer holiday, we travelled to Qingdao and pay a visit to my uncle there. It was a long and tired journey. But the moment when I arrived, I fell in love with the city. It's so beautiful a city as I can hardly find any word to describe them. The streets are clean. If you walk along the coast, you can feel the wind blowing in your face. The sea is blue and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship floating by. You may also do some fishing as long as it permitted. Moreover, I think  the driver there drive too fast in the street. You can never be carefully enough when crossing the streets.

增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出增加的词;

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。

    I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on what to learn Chinese well.

    Here are few suggestions. First, it is important to taking a Chinese course. Then you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with you fellow students.

    Then, it also help to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possibly. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing China songs.

    By doing so you'll learn or remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friend. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.

    Try and write me in Chinese at next time.