假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
As the Internet is developing fast,more and more new words and phrases have created in Chinese.Here are some as examples.One of most popular words are Dianzan,that is often used when you quite agree someone.Another example is Renxing.When you say somebody is Renxing,you mean that they will do however they like.The phrase Miaosha first come from online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping orders before others.And now it's wide used when you achieve your purpose in a very short time.If you describe somebody as a Tuhao,you mean that he or she is very rich.You can find lots of such new Chinese words.Keep learn and you'll know more about Chinese culture.
