增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均只限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

    A foreign student graduated with honors from a finely university in Germany. He expected to find a good job and have a bright future. But in his disappointment, he wasn't even giving the chance for an interview! The third time he was refused, he phoned the company to ask how. "We don't employ dishonest people in Germany" is the answer. What was wrong? Shortly before he arrived in Germany, he found easy to steal subway rides. But he often rode without a ticket and was caught up three times. Now he had to pay a high price for his own behavior. We should all keep in minds: honesty is the best policy.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I liked cycling very much. At age of twelve, my father bought me a bike as a birthday gifts and taught me how to ride. Every time my father took him out for practice, my little brother would come along. One day, we were practicing while suddenly my brother screamed to help. When we rushed to him, we saw a snake wind around a frog tightly. I beg my father to save the frog. Immediate he picked it up a long stick, trying to drive the snake away. About two minutes later, the frog was set loose, what made us so happy.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改： 在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

    As the saying goes, many little drop of water make an ocean. A small action may lead to major changes took place in society. My friends and I had participated in a voluntary activity at a nursing home last week. We first did some cleaning or washing. After that we spent half an hour chatted with the old people living there. Though it was a tired day, we were happy with that we did. I felt a sense of responsibility by visiting the old. If all of us lend a helping hand to the people in need, they can live in harmony with each other. A society is just as a family. If we are willing to help others, our small actions can make big difference.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I was always afraid of water because I nearly get drowned when I was young. As I grew old, this fear was still with me. However, my attitude to water changed last summer. One day, several classmates asked me lean to swim with them, and of course, I said no. But they were quite determined and repeated explained the benefits of swimming for me. So finally I agreed to give them a try. You can imagine what scared I was when I first had stepped into the swimming pool. But gradually, I found it great funs in the water. Now I'm no longer a gird live in fear of water.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Mistakes are unavoidable in life. But attitudes towards it may make a difference.

    I still remember how my spoken English was improved. In a beginning, I always kept silent in our oral class to avoid make mistakes. Before long my teacher got to know about my situation. He encouraged me to speak out that I thought. Whenever I made mistakes and felt discouraging, my teacher and my classmates would help me figure out how I could have avoided them. I also joined in an English club to get more chances to speak. Practice made perfect. Now I can talk fluent in English.

    Just as the saying goes, “Every bean has its black.” Don't afraid of making mistakes. Learn from mistakes, or success is just waiting for us.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用( \ )划掉；

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈没出错误及其修改均仅限一次；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It is Sunday. Mrs. Read got up early in the Morning. She had some housework to do it. After breakfast she has a look at the watch and found it had stopped work. She bought it ten years ago, so she wanted buy a new one. Her daughter Sue was only four. Her husband was busy with his works and nobody looked for Sue. The woman could not let her to stay at home. So she took Sue to the shop in the town with she. It was a good day, Mrs. Read and her daughter went to the three floor in order to choose her favorite watch.