Today, more and more high school student publish their own blogs on the Internet. For one thing, it can provide colorful platform to show their talents, and for another, it is also a way to release their pressure. And this make it popular to high school students. But many parents and teachers hold a same view, and they think that managing a blog will take a lot of time and energy, while this should be used study which is their main duty. Personally, I do approve of this activity. Open and organizing an eye-catching blog needs various abilities such like writing, designing and so on. Only if that we have those abilities can we make a good blog. And also, we can improve themselves during the procedure of organizing our blogs.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）。并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

 2）. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

    Nowadays, it is very easily to find a student who is nearsighted. What's worse, the number of nearsighted students are still increasing. From my point of view, there are many reason that can cause nearsightedness. First of all, the wrong posture will result from nearsightedness. Read in the dark places can lead to nearsightedness as well as. Moreover, too much reading without a rest can be other important reason. My dear friends, it is high time that we paid attention to protect our eyes. The most useful method is do eye exercises more often and relax for a while after reading. Watching green trees could also do good to the eyes.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    My name is Ann. I've been in China in a few years. With the help of Li Hua, a good friend of mine, I've been used to live in China. Li Hua, like many girls, are beautiful and lively. We became friends after we meet each other a few years ago. Although her English isn't easy to understand, but we enjoy chatting and we usually talk a lot about our favorite books. We're both surprised that Chinese culture or American culture are so differently. Now we are planning nice party for next Sunday. There, I will introduce Li Hua to my friends, one of who has been to China several time.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Peter,

    I'm writing to tell you something about e-hongbao, that is very popular in China.

    E-hongbao is actual a kind of lucky money from and to relatives and friends during festivals or in special occasions. For many young people, grabbing e-hongbao on our mobile phones is a fairly exciting activity. Unlike the tradition of elders give lucky money to children, over half of the people sending e-hongbao is in their 20s. It's just for fun but giving best wishes, while the sum of money matters a little. In a word, e-hongbao is bringing new color to the old tradition.

    Now I'm concerned about the safe of online payment, and rules and regulations needed to be improved to guarantee its operation.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（、）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'd like tell you something about your life in this boarding school. I stay in a dormitory with three other girls，all of them are kind and nice. We get on well to others and have become good friends．Living in a boarding school make me independent. I am confidence to take care of myself，wash the clothes，and clean the rooms，which I never did when at home. The classes here are very interesting and challenged. I am still feeling a little dissatisfied with some other thing. The living conditions are not as well as those at home and the chance to get in touch with the outside world is limited. Anyway，I will get used to it and hope the everything will be better soon.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    During my process of grow up, senior high school life is most wonderful. The teachers give excellent lessons on a special way. All of them have rich knowledge. They not only explain the contents of textbooks and also provide extra information from many other aspect. Every word they say it in class makes me feel exciting. I have a strong desire to learn as much as I can. There are different after-school activities what are organized by us. We often shared a lot of things together. I am absolute fond of my senior school life.