增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.

    One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky, that looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured. That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Our school conducts a survey on reading last week. According to the results, most students believe reading is important. Over 50% say they enjoy reading a lot of. 79% find it interesting while 21% think reading is bored. The results show that girls read much books than boys. Over 66% like to read fiction book. 64% of the students would like read stories about famous people. 50% are interested in reading our own culture and tradition. The survey also shows that libraries are how students get most of his books. Therefore, many students complain our school library don't have enough up-to-date books.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Yesterday morning, I was surprising to hear that my friend Tom has been hit by a car and was in hospital. The other day he was going to cross the street on his way to school. He was very careful and didn't go until he saw traffic lights turn to green. But hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car suddenly appear on his right­hand side and come direct towards him. It was too later for Tom to dodge (躲开). Hitting by the car, he was thrown a few meters away. He was sent to hospital immediately and had a operation. When I went to see him last night, he was out of dangers but still looked pale. He had to stay in hospital for several days to recover the serious injury.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线线（＼）划掉

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'm sorry that I wasn't able to return to your bike on time yesterday. I mean to give it back to you before four in the afternoon，but I was hold up on my way back. Just before I turned corner of Park Street. I happened to see an accident. A little girl was hurt but her mother needed help. So I helped them going to the nearest hospital. I stayed there for one and a half hour and made sure that the girl was all rightly. When I got back, it were already 6 pm. I hope your understand.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    As you know, the UN is a international organization made up of countries want to promote world peace. The UN touches the lives of people in everywhere. The organization are helping end some of the world's most horribly conflicts. The UN does not have their own army. Instead, it borrows soldiers from different countries belonged to the UN. Under the help of these armies and other worth organizations, the UN assists the victims of wars and disasters. In addition, the UN helps protect human rights and works to improve international laws, for example, those on child labour and on equal rights for minority and women.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Ben,

    I'm glad to know about that you are enthusiastic about Chinese classics these days. In order to better your understand of Chinese literature, I think, Journey to the West, one of the four great classical novel, will make the best choice.

    Journey to the West, writing by Wu Cheng'en in 16th century, tells a story about Priest Tang and his three followers. We travel westward to India. After overcoming difficulties, they eventual get true Buddhism.

    You are sure to enjoy read the novel but you're welcome to share with me your opinions.

    I wished you could pay a visit to China when it is convenient for you.

Yours,

Li Hua