增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr. Yang,

    I am writing to let you know that I needed your help with my English writhing. Which is known to all, grammar plays a very vital part in the writing. But I feel that I have some problems of my grammar. I am afraid that I am not able to identify my specifically errors. I would be grateful if you could point out and correct your mistakes. What is more, I used to the Chinese way of thinking, which stops me organize my writing in a proper way. I am wondering that you could also help me improve the structures of my writing.

    I am looking forward to making great progresses under your instruction. Thanks are extended to you in advance!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错误的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    When I was a kid, my sisters and I started a club for fan of a band. Our club met regular to trade facts about the band's and to listen to their music. We were all different ages, and we might not have many common besides our love for this music, or the club was important to us for a while. We had good time and became good friends.

    Since then, I had joined all kind of clubs. Clubs give us a chance to focus on special interests, improve a skill, or learn about new one. Clubs are also about make new friends. I've learned that the best clubs are the ones that welcome someone who wants to join.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

    Mark Twain was born in a small town of Horid. When he is only twelve years old, his father died. Late, he became a river boat pilot. Mark Twain was her pen name. During the American Civil War, he worked as a reporter，travelling and write a lot of stories. Gradually, he made himself know and faced with great popularity. He became one of the best known writer of the 19th century in the U.S.A. In his life, Mark Twain wrote the number of stories and novels, which “Adventure of Tom Sawyer” is the most famous one. His writings have been translated to many other languages and they are deeply loved by the readers all over the world.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Teenagers often have problems with English. Yesterday we hold a discussion about what to learn English well. We came up with some suggestion. For example, some of us thought it was important to take the active part in classroom activities, because we could learn a lot of during the activities. Some agreed that watching American films could a good way to improve listening and speaking skills. Others suggested read English novels to practise English.

    As for me, I prefer listening careful to teachers in class. What's more, writing to your pen pal in America help me much with my English. I hope all of us can find our own ways to learn English well.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last week, I take part in the Cultural Exchange Week. I enjoyed myself in England. I visited the city museum and several place of interest, which made me have better understanding of the English society, culture and history.

    What's more, I was lucky enough to meeting my pen friend Tom there. I stayed at his home. And I'll never forget the days when we spent together. When I left England, he offered to me a dictionary as a gift. It's of great help with me to learn English. I will make full use of them and learn English good.

    I hope Tom will come to China when it's convenience for him!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last weekend, my parents and I went to visit my grandparents who live in the countryside. See us, my grandparents were very happy. I particular like their garden, where is full of vegetables and flowers. They also raise chickens, goose, cats, and dogs. Although the dogs and the cats was very friendly to me, but the chickens attacked me.

    My grandma prepare a big dinner for us and most of the dishes came the garden. We all liked the pollution-free vegetables. When we left, my grandpa picked a lot of fruits or vegetables from the garden for us to take home. I love their grandparents and the garden, too.