假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    One night, I was on my home for my Christmas holiday when my car broke down. It was complete dead, and I was a few miles away from my home in that cold, wet night. I decided to walk around a little after accepting that I'd have to spend the night in the car. Maybe I can find a telephone. Actually, I didn't have to walk far before I found the small house standing in a field with a light shone from the sitting room. I knocked the door and was delighting when a pleasant old man opened the door and listened to my story carefully. He said he had no telephone and that it wasn't any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go to repair my car.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Hello, everybody! I'm honored to be here sharing my ideas on high school life to you. First, we should try our best to develop good qualities, such as being actively. Additionally, get along well with others can never be ignored, that can help us make good friends and live a happy life. Second, studying effectively really count. A good habit like reviewing is of great important to the challenging study. Third, we should never forget to join sports and outdoor activities. Being energetic, I have dealt with my life more confident. I hope what I have been shared can help you lead the better life in senior high school. Wish everything a great success. That's all. Thank you.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last weekend, my parents and I went to visit my grandparents who live in the countryside. See us, my grandparents were very happy. I particular like their garden, where is full of vegetables and flowers. They also raise chickens, goose, cats, and dogs. Although the dogs and the cats was very friendly to me, but the chickens attacked me.

    My grandma prepare a big dinner for us and most of the dishes came the garden. We all liked the pollution-free vegetables. When we left, my grandpa picked a lot of fruits or vegetables from the garden for us to take home. I love their grandparents and the garden, too.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    During my process of grow up, senior high school life is most wonderful. The teachers give excellent lessons on a special way. All of them have rich knowledge. They not only explain the contents of textbooks and also provide extra information from many other aspect. Every word they say it in class makes me feel exciting. I have a strong desire to learn as much as I can. There are different after-school activities what are organized by us. We often shared a lot of things together. I am absolute fond of my senior school life.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    With the proverb goes, "Good habits benefit from you all your life." Enter high school, I was crazy about fast food and ate too many. As a result, I was too heavily overweight that I suffered a lot from my awkward appearance. Worse still, my classmates play jokes on me at times. From then on, I made up my mind to avoid snacks and to take up jogging to lose weights. Because of the timely change, it was not long after I did succeed in creating my new image. Only then did I realize the importance of forming good habit.

    To be honest, the change in our habit means a lot to me, which is good for my success and helps me regain confidence.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    As teenagers, we should attach great important to reading. Reading can benefit from us teenagers a great deal. Firstly, reading improves our school grades. Secondly, reading helps us expanding our horizons. Thirdly, reading may contribute to finding solutions to their own problems. Finally, reading is a enjoyable experience.

    It is strongly suggested that our spare time is made full use of read as much as possible. We teenagers should stay devoted to read what we are interested in. Besides, we should active participate in some activities that are related to reading, what we can not only get our knowledge enriched but also gain a lot of pleasure.