增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删减：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Friday, our school organized us to a fire station, what we had expected for several day. When we got there, the fire-fighters welcomed us but led us into an exhibition hall. There one of them delivered the lecture on fire control to us. After that, they show us how to operate a fire extinguisher, and even gave our chances to practise using it. Now, I dare say I can use it skillful! On our way home, we couldn't help to talking about what we had experienced. We felt very happy and excited because we had gained so many knowledge about fire control and known what to do an emergency.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Bruce,

    I'm very excited to learn from that you will start an English magazine called New Babel. That sounds great and I definitely agree with you on that.

    Some of the columns mention in the letter are really my cup of tea. “Cultural Express” gives us better understanding of the world. Unless people from different parts of the world have different value, it's necessary to learn from each other. Apart from that, “Thoughts” is pretty good for us Chinese students to open our minds and practice their critical thinking. “Entertainment” is amazing! The stories about those popular celebrities are so attractively that we absolutely can't miss this part. As is often the case, teenagers were fond of popular things.

    Well, I can't list less. I really look forward to read this magazine.

Yours,

Thomas

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sir or Madam,

    I'm Li Hua, passenger on the flight number BA 793 of your company. I take the flight from America on December 3, 2015. Unlucky, I found one of my suitcases losing at the airport. Here I am eagerly writing to you to ask for helps.

    The suitcase is a black mid-sized one with your name tagged on the handle, which contains many important personal files and some scientific materials. It took me much time and energy to get them but they are valuable in my scientific study. Beside, there are some presents I bought them for my friends and family members.

    I'm looking forward to hear good news from you.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一橫线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分

    Everyone should take the action to reduce haze (雾霾), which is harmless to our health. First of all, I believe that if we plant more tree, there will be less haze in their city. Trees can absorb exhaust fumes (尾气) from cars, thus reduce pollution. Second, the government should punish the factories where produce too many fumes. Exhaust fumes is the main cause of haze and do greatly harm to people's health. Maybe we can move factories to areas where few people live. Third, I think it was a great idea to encourage people to use public transportation. Last but not least, we can call on citizens ride bikes if they travel short journeys.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My little brother was almost three years old while I took him to the post office in our town for a first time. As I fill out my return receipt form, my brother looked around at another people in line. I noticed him staring at the pictures on the wall. "Who is the people on the wall?" he asked. I explained patiently him that they were bad people that the police were bad people that the police were searching for them. My brother looked up at me with the sweetest face but asked curiously, "Then why didn't they keep them when take their pictures?" I was complete without words.