增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ˆ）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

Having a good teacher do mean a lot to us students and I am lucky enough to have the one —Miss Brown, my English teacher.

    Miss Brown is a charming lady always worn a big smile on her face. In the first class she introduced her and then asked us to say something about ourselves with English. When it was my turn, I felt too shy and fearful that I didn't dare to say a word. She came up to me and said, “Don't afraid. You can make it. Just have a try.” At last, I did it quite good. She praised me for that I had done.

    Never shall I forgot my first English class in senior high school.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾）.并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉，

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

    Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and 1 rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how 1 was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Hello, everyone! I'm honored to share with you my opinion on “smile”.

    Hard although life as, I want to smile whenever and wherever possibly.

    First, I would like to smile at my parents for giving me life and providing which I need to bring me up. Beside, I would like to say “thank you” to my teachers with a smile as well as. With their help, I have made great progresses. Then my smile should go to me. Only in this way I gain more confidence in smile my difficulties away and live a better life.

    In the word, let's greet every day with a smile.

    That's all. Thank you!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改l0处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I used to going to the countryside to draw animals and plants. One day I was walking across a field, looking rabbits to draw. Losing in thought, I hadn't noticed a bull to running towards me. About 100 meters ahead was a tree under that I would sit and draw. Suddenly, I heard the noise behind me. I turned and saw the bull. Knowing a bull can run more faster than a man, I quickly reached the tree and climb up. From there I saw the bull kicking my food bag with it feet. It kept doing this for 15 minute and moved away. But I was quite nervous in the tree.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at first sight. Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocking face! She was about to get out of the shop when a shop assistant came over to us. She explained that it was her own cup, that she'd left on the shelf by mistakes. The assistant was clearly as embarrassed as my sister, for I just thought of it was funny!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    The world seems to be facing two problem. One is that too many people are dangerous over-weighted. This type of problem called obesity(肥胖症). Obesity is when a person have more than 25-30 percent of body fat. The other problem is a illness called anorexia(厌食症). This is when people are dangerously thin; we are less than 85% of their normal body weight. All of these problems are very serious because of the body cannot work properly when it is too fat or too thin. The heart, liver, kidneys and lungs will not be able to keep the body health.

    People can die from illnesses causing by being too fat or too thin.