I've learned from the newspaper that your company is looking for receptionist. I'm very interesting in the job and I'd like to apply to the position.

    First of all, allow me to introduce myself. I had just graduated from high school and taken the University Entrance Examination. I want to find out a part-time job this summer. I'm 18 year old and have a good command of English, especial in terms of speaking and listening. In fact, I once won the first prize in the English speech competition hold in our school. Besides, I'm quite easy-going but therefore very popular among my classmates.

    I sincerely hope you can give us a chance. I'm looking forward to your early reply.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词的下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Nowadays many people drive instead of taking a bus or walking to work. It causes more traffic jam and accidents. As the student, what can we do to guarantee our safe? First of all, the traffic rules must be strict obeyed. When we cross streets, wait until the traffic light turn green. Next, don't forget walk on the pavement. Finally, I think it very dangerously to wear headphones while walking or cycling. Since we can't pay enough attention on the traffic around us, so accidents may happen. Taking good care of ourselves and don't let our parents worry about us.

增加、删除或修改。

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线（）,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last night I was preparing for the coming examination while the noise from my neighbor interrupts me. The noise went on and on. It was so loud that I could hard pay attention to my study any longer. So I went to my neighbor's house but said to him: “Excuse me, would you please turn down the TV? I'm preparing for tomorrow's exam.” When he heard these word, his face went the red. And he said, “I'm sorry to have made so much noise. Just now, the football game was very wonderful. I'm too exciting to control me. I won't do that again. Good lucky in your coming exam.” After that, I got down my study.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    My cousin, Daniel, is the most success person I know, even though he has had many difficulties on his road to achieve success. His parents died in a accident when he was 17. Daniel needed to take care of his two younger brother, so he left school and found a job at a supermarket. At night, he helped them about homework and did all the housework. Daniel was also a very good worker. His boss was decided to help him go to college. It takes Daniel eight years, but finally he finished. Now Daniel plans attend a business management course and start his own business three years late. Daniel has a dream, but he is working hard to achieve it.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I used to be a fat girl, weighs 80 kilos. I was afraid of having PE classes because I was often laughed on the playground. At first, I decided to eat less in order to lose the weight. However, just several days late, I began to feel tired and can't concentrate in class. My parents took me to see our doctor, that told me what was not a good idea to eat only a little. Instead, he advised me to eat a balanced diet but encouraged me to work out every day. I followed his advices and gradually I became very slimly.

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Not long after Freddy and the band became famous. They visited Britain on a brief tour. Fans showed their devoted by waiting for hours to get ticket for their concerts. His most exciting invitation was perform on a TV programme calling "Top of the Pops." As soon as the programme is over, they were truly stars. Freddy and his band could not go out anywhere without be followed. At last feel very upset and sensitive, Freddy and his band realized that they must leave a country before it became too painful for them. So they left from Britain, to that they were never to return.