增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Our school photography club is going to held an International High School Student Photography Show.

    As far as I know, the theme of the show is environmental protection. Actually, I know you are gifted in take good pictures and had always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I clearly remember you showed me some photo on that theme the last time when you visited our school. Beside, it will start on June 15^th and last three weeks. What makes me exciting is that any student whom is interested can participate in it. In word, I firmly believe this is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, send my photos to photoshow@126.com.

    Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出改加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Patience is of great important in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left than the bus had arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then did I realize my problem. Be impatient will probably waste all the effort what we have put in. Now whenever I am about to losing my patience, I will think of this experience.

注意：1）词数100左右；2）可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯；3）不允许写真实校名及学校真实情况；4）开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Mr. Brown,

Sincerely yours ,

Li Hua

要点：1)你的个人信息；

2)你的个人优势：如所取得的成绩，特长，爱好等、

3)进入香港大学后的设想

注意：1)80词左右

2)可适当增减细节，以使行文连贯

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    During the summer holiday, I thought I should do anything meaningful instead of touring. So I got a job at a fast food restaurant but worked there as a cleaner. I worked 7 hours day for three weeks. The job was boring and seemed endless, in which made me so tired that I nearly stopped it halfway. After all, I stuck to it with determinations. Every day, I started off for work early in the morning, and went home later in the evening. Finally, I finished the job before the new school term begins. Now, I understand how labor means. I think it is a successfully experience, which is worth remember forever.