1）表示歉意；

2）解释原因；

3）期待重逢。

注意：1）词数100左右；

2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

1）表达给她提供帮助的意愿；

2）说明你能胜任辅导的理由；

3）给出讲好普通话的两点建议；

4）提出你学习英语的具体需求。

注意：

1）词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；

2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3）文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称。

Hi Sharon,

    This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin……

Yours,

Li Xia

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity. Others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    The winter holiday, which I am looking forward to, are coming. What a fun it is to have sports! Ski is one of my interest. I can also ride my bicycle, climb high mountains and go skating. Beside, I can play chess with my grandfather. How interesting my holiday would be! And my father is always afraid I will hurt by truck, fall into water or fall off a tree. He is afraid I will fight against others or be taken away by worse men. But if I am friendly and carefully enough, how will these things happen? I must try my best persuade my father.

要点：①感谢父母的养育之恩、感谢老师的培养之情；②表达努力学习，争取好成绩的决心；③表达为社会、为国家承担责任的意志。

注意：①词数不少于100；②可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；③信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

    Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,

    I am greatly honored to speak on behalf of my schoolmates at this coming-of-age ceremony.

    Thank you.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Yesterday evening I went to the supermarket. When I was about to enter I see an old lady of deformed(畸形的) hands calling me. At the first, I got afraid but then I decided to go ahead and find out that she wanted. She asked me for some money. She said I hadn't eaten anything since that morning. I gave her some money and she happy went to a food stand and had her food. It made me realize we went shopping without think twice then forget all about it in a few day. However, there are people don't even have money to get a meal. I hope to spreading kindness to those in need in any way possible.