增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sarah,

    Thank you for ask me about Qianmen Street. Vm glad tell you something about it. Qianmen Street, that is more than 800 meters long and has a history of over 600 years, is a famous street. There are about 300 shops along both side of it. So it is easy for you to buy which you need. Since it lies just to the south of Tian'anmen Square, the transportation is very conveniently. Not only Buses No. 17 and 59 but also Subway Line 2 carry you there. Qianmen Street was well-known as a walking street, so you can also take horse-drawn cars to teahouses or theatres where you can learn much about Chinese culture and lifestyle. I believe you can have a fun here.

    Welcome to Beijing!

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在改词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。

    Last summer vacation, my parents and I go to the countryside to visit my uncle. It took us three hours get there by car. After having lunch on my uncle's, we went fishing in the river near her house. I was very exciting because I caught a lot of fish there. The next day, we decided to rode bikes around the village. The village was very beautiful but we were very relaxed. Then we had a picnic in a park where many child were flying kites. The country life was very peacefully. I hope that I can go there again the next year.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I went to the seaside to spending my summer holiday with my family. We stayed there for two week. The weather was much hotter than in my hometown, but I got used to it or felt at home. Every morning, I got up early than my parents and went for breakfast ahead of the time. Then I went to have a chat with my new friend, John, whom I happen to come across during my holiday. John was a native and quite warm-heartedly man and he was familiar to the seaside well. Soon we became very good friends. Since we parted, we have kept write to each other.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改 10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Many people used to gather to dance in our community square, where was designed to improve living quality. Although dancing could do good to their health, but the long-time dancing and loud noise causing by the loudspeaker really brought the neighbors inconvenience. I couldn't rest or sleep well, which made me terrible upset. I felt such sleepy in class that I performed badly in study. To solve a problem, I communicated with the organizers and suggested that they should shorten the dance time and reduced the music noise. Only doing so could they have fun and let others enjoy life. To their delight, they adopted my advices.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I always wanted to be great scientist. I had these dreams of discovering a new drug that would save the life of hundreds of people. Unfortunate, I was never very good at chemistry at school and the teacher used to getting very angry with me. After a while, I decided I would become an inventor and designed an only product which would become a household name. My parents were quite encouraged, but told me to be a little more realistic. A few weeks late, I had a clever idea for a pen that would write with upside down. To my disappointment, a friend of me pointed out it was not a new discovery.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，井在其下面写岀该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉；

修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Healthy eating along with regular exercise is probable the only way to become fit. As a teenager, it is important give your body the energy it needs. For a healthy diet, you should eat mostly rice, bread, vegetables and fruit. They also need to drink plenty of water. Besides, exercise is one of the most important things which can help to make you look good and feel good. Experts suggested teenagers spend at least 30 minutes exercising, five time a week. A good amount of sleep every night are also important for your health. As the matter of fact, loss of sleep can have a bad effect to you. If you follow the suggestions above, you'll look and feel much more better in no time at all!