增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Saturday I went to the Great Wall with some of my friends.In our way up,we saw many volunteers working in the sun.They helped the elders with their bags,took photo for some tourists and answered people's questions.Because they were very tired,they didn't stop to have a rest.Just at the moment,we saw a little boy standing alone,cried.We went over and asked what is the matter.From his answer we knew he couldn't find her mother.We told him not to worry and then we tried to get in the touch with his mother with the phone number he had given us. Twenty minutes late,his mother turned up,and thanked us again and again.That day we enjoyed the beauty of the Great Wall,and felt the warm of the society.If everyone can reach out helping to others,the world will be more harmonious.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词尾（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It was a freezing winter night. I pulled myself along the way before a long day's work stand behind the counter. An empty stomach and only ten-dollar note and a few pennies in the pocket, my life seemed hopelessly. Despite the warm Christmas atmosphere, my heart was frozen to dead. “Excuse me, Madam. Would you please be too kind as to give a few pennies? The little angels will appreciate for it.” A sweet voice rise behind me. I turned and found a plain-looking girt with two abandoned dogs. Without hesitations, I handed over the note in my pocket. Cheerfully the girl wait away and she would never know how she saved my day and my life.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Jack,

    I'm sorry to hear that you feel lonely in the new school, because you find hard to make friends. Now, I'd like to offer you any advice.

    Firstly, it's normal for you to feel lonely because you were living in a new environment. Secondly, you should greet your classmates when met them on campus. Thirdly, it will be a good idea if you take an actively part in class activities, what can help them learn more about you. I believe you will be able to make new friends soon unless you're friendly to the others.

    I hope the suggestion above will be helpful to you and everything will be fine with you for the future.

Yours

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

    Last week, I went to a painting exhibition. Upon enter the gallery, I put on the earphones which would give me informations of all the paintings. Suddenly, I noticed that the elderly woman who didn't know how to use the earphones stood anxiously in front of a painting. I rushed to her with hesitation but helped her put on the earphones. The woman thanks me for my kindness. I realized that was reaching out to others that could really bring a great moment of happiness, which was benefit to me so much. That day when I appreciated lots of breathtaking paintings. What's more, I learned a valuable lesson from the grateful smile giving by the elderly woman.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

    It's been two years when I joined the campus radio station. During this time, I had done several interviews. Every time I finish to writing an article, I am proud of myself for able to introduce my schoolmates to the things I've seen. It was difficult at times, but when I saw my stories publish in our school newspaper, you knew that it was something worth doing. My parents, teachers and schoolmates congratulated me on that I did. I felt happily when I shared a new story with them. The greatest thing about being the reporter is being able to share your thought with others.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    One afternoon in early spring, I caught sight of poster in my community on which read "Green Community, Beautiful Home" I found the activity quite meaningfully and decided to take part.

    Since my mom was fond of flowers, we choose Chinese roses. With everything preparing, I carefully planted the flower seedlings and gently watered it.

    Now looking after plant has become part of my life. This way, I can feel the simple pleasure of life but harvest a sense of achievement. The seedlings are grown little by little, and I can't help picturing what beautiful our neighborhood will be when all the flowers come out.