增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出修改后的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sally,

    Now I'd like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own.I've come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I'll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I've learnt how to get along well with others.

    What's worse, I've gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can' t be learnt from textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In a word, I had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

Yours,

Li Bing

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起），不计分.

    When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city , but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so , we'll live to regret it .

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I was reading an article in a book while I came across a word I didn't know. “Dad, what is the meaning of the word?” My dad, as he usual did after work, was watching his most favorite show. “You have the dictionary, don't you?” he shot back. He didn't even look up my face. I went back my room, and there on my study table is that dictionary. I looked it up and found it's exact meaning. Ten year have passed and I still use that dictionary, along with the lesson I received earlier in life from my old man: to be independent.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I ordered a birthday gift for my sister on the Internet three days ago. The gift whose the price is not high is a beautiful pink cup decorating with my sister's name, her date of birth, and some best wishes to her as well. It's such lovely a cup with a picture of a cartoon dog on it that both my sister and I liked it by first sight.

    Besides, I am very satisfying with Alipay Security Control, which is very convenient and safely. And I am pleased with the delivery service. I received the cup yesterday. Don't you think it's very fast?

    He enjoy shopping online very much. There is no doubt that more and more people preferred to shop online nowadays. We don't need spend much time going to the shops or markets with such a good number of different choice on the Internet.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    One day when I was at four, I played outside in the courtyard. I caught sight my dad's truck and thought he shouldn't have to drive such a ugly truck. Then I spot a tin of white paint. I picked up a brush and started painting white dot all over the truck. I was on the roof busy doing the job while my dad walked up, looked at me in surprise. Before I explained anything, he said cheerful, “Angela, that's the pretty truck I've ever seen!” He could have blamed me. But he didn't. Therefore, he lifted my little soul with those encouraging words.

增加：在缺河处加一个字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余的词用线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）每处情误及其修改均仅限一词

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

    On May Day, some students from class Three. Grade One, went to nursing home but did some meaningful work upon our arrival they were warm welcomed. And then they started sweeping floor and cleaning the windows. Before finishing the task, they sit in the yard chatting with the elderly people, When it were time for them to leaving, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness, they said it was so a beautiful and happy day that they would remember of it forever.