增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1  每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I'm Li Hua and I'm writing to apply forthe assistant post you advertised on Internet.

    It is stated in my resume(简历), I graduated from Zhejiang University with outstanding academic performances. I have a good command of English, and which is an advantage when apply for a job like this. Among all the factor, cooperation is the most important strength of a good assistant. I think I do good in the team work and I'm good at communicate with different people. Besides, I once get a part-time job in 2012 in Shandong Province and gained some precious work experience.

    Since your company attaches important to employees' creativity, that's an honor for me to be one of your staff. I'm so positive that I can be fit for the job if offered the chance. Thanks for your consideration.

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增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起 ）不计分。

    I like riding my bike. Though it is not very new, but it is my best friend. I find very convenient to go anywhere with a bike. Ride gives me not only exercise but also pleasure. I use my bike mostly on summer when the weather is warm and dry. It can very unpleasant in winter when it is cold and rain is pouring down. It can also be very danger. Of course I will be very careful on my bike. In facts, accidents are not the only problem. One day I went to school and come back to find his front wheel was missing. It was a long walk to the repairer's shop. Now I have two strong locks.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    On a snowy winter night, a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because of the wet road. And all of them were trapping in the bus and what was worse, the bus ran out gas and it was very cold in it. They could do nothing but to wait. A man lived nearby saw what had happened. He and some villagers managed to open the door and helped all of them out of a bus. Then he took us to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children. They spent two days in his home and help came final. All of them are thankful to him for what he did.

文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在该词下面写出该加的词；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

    On a storm night, I was alone at home. After finishing my homework, I was about to go to bed. All of sudden, the light went out. Meanwhile, there was a flash of lightning following by thunderstorms. I was so terrified that I ran to my bed but hid me under the blanket. To make matters bad, my parents went to hospital to accompany with my sick grandfather. I felt too frightened because my mind was full of scary thoughts. After some time passed, I fall asleep at last. At breakfast I told my parents that I had seen last night. My parents were also frightened and they promised that they would ever leave me at home alone.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I participated in a gymnastic competition last Saturday. My mom or sister went to the stadium to cheer for me. My mom seemed to have sensed my anxious. She comforted me by tell me that I was the best. Besides, she told me to close my eye and take a deep breath. When it was my turn to performing, I entered with a smile and wave to the crowd. I just focused my performance. At the end of the competition, my mom gave me a warmly hug. My sister said it, "You should regard this as a glorious defeat." Although I didn't won, I felt proud of myself.