修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Yesterday I went to the park and happened see a touching event. Three teenager friends were boating on the lake, taken photos, when a girl of them fell into the water. She was struggling and the other one cried out for help repeated. It was clear why they couldn't swim. Then a man ran to the lake quickly. Without taking on his clothes, he jumped into the water and swim towards the girl. He carried her to the lakeside and she was saved from danger at the last!

    How happily the girl's friends became! Before they thought of thanking the man, she had left.

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Like most of my schoolmate, I have neither brothers nor sisters — in any other words, I am an only child. My parents love me dear of course and will do all they can to make sure that I get a good education. They did not want me to do any work at family. They want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I'll get good marks in all my subject. We may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they really understand their own daughter? What things are in other homes, I wonder.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I couldn't believe my ears when I heard my name calling. I was chosen to play the leading role in the play，that was my dream. As a shy and thin girl，I used to be quite afraid of speaking in the public. But my parents and teachers always encourage me to do so. Now I have changed great. In class，I am often the first one to stand up and answer questions even if I may take some mistakes. No pains，no gains. Now I am always brave enough overcome the difficulty in my heart and have changed in a lively girl. So my experience shows that we should not be afraid of losing face but only in this way can we make progresses.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    A friend of mine was giving English lesson to a class of foreign placing quite a number of everyday object on a table， he asked them to give her the ruler, the book and so on. The class went very smooth. The students seemed interested in the work until my friend turned on to an Italian student but said，“ Give me the keys. The Italian looked surprising and somewhat at a loss. Seeing this， My friend thinks that the Italian hadn't heard him clearly. However, he repeated, “Give me the keys.” The Italian then kissed him on all cheeks.

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Last Sunday, while eating in a restaurant, I notice a bowl full of dumplings on the table next to mine. They must have been left by someone. Just then, the old man entered. Judged from his clothes, I believed she was poor. He saw the dumplings left on the table. Looking shyly, he sat down and started eating. The others around looked him, puzzled, but some even laughed. However, after finishing the dumplings, he went up to the donation boxes on the counter, put one hundred yuan in it and left, that left us all shocked and ashamed. We shouldn't judge by a person just from his or her appearance.