增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Keeping a diary in English is the effective way to improve our English writing ability．

    First, it takes little time to finish a diary than other writings．By keeping English diaries, we can easy form the habit of thinking about in English．

    Second, we can practice use English idioms and useful structures in our diary-writing．If we have difficulty finding suitable words or phrases to express our opinion, we can turn in English dictionaries or teacher for help．This is also a kind of learning．If we can keep on doing this, we would gradually learn how express ourselves in English freely．

    In a word, it was of great benefit to keep diaries in English．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    When Joe left university,she got a good job in the bike factory.But after he had been worked there for some years,he decided to have a change,so he put a notice in several newspaper.It stated what experience he had and the kind of job he will like to have.One of the answers he received was about a man looking for a job,too.This man wrote to him,"Dear sir,when you get a new job,being kind enough to give my name or address to your present boss as I have beer trying to find a position like yours for a long time."After he read the letter,he sudden realized he had done was really foolish.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Many people are fond of Chinese cuisine. In China, cooking regarded not only as a skill, but also as an art. All well-preparing Chinese dishes are all tasty and good-looking. The cooking skills vary in different region of China. Therefore, good Chinese cuisines always share nothing in common, that is, color, fragrance and taste. As for food is important to one's health, a good chef is always try to seek a balance among grain, meat and vegetables. That's because Chinese cuisine is tasty and health.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    A year ago, the factory where my brother worked closed down because of poorly management. He became one of those people who was out of work overnight. He didn't complain like others. However, he thought of it as a good chance. To equip himself with a bright future, he attended evening class to learn more knowledge. And at the same time, he opened online bookstore. Owing to her good service, the bookshop was very popular. His hard work had finally paid off. Talk of his success, he smiled and said, “God help those who help themselves.”

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均限一词。

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    With the time going by, Wang Hua is now a senior three student that devote himself to his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, he attended several classes. In the evening, he studied at home until deep into the night. He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn't work effectively. In Sunday morning, Wang Hua was about to study while his father came up and advised him to have break. Soon they came up with a good idea. They bought a kite which they liked it very much and then the family went to the suburbs where Wang Hua enjoyed himself fly the kite. The family had a picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On Monday, Wang Hua was energetic and actively in class. He said it was only because he has a better weekend.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Yesterday evening I went to the supermarket. When I was about to enter I see an old lady of deformed(畸形的) hands calling me. At the first, I got afraid but then I decided to go ahead and find out that she wanted. She asked me for some money. She said I hadn't eaten anything since that morning. I gave her some money and she happy went to a food stand and had her food. It made me realize we went shopping without think twice then forget all about it in a few day. However, there are people don't even have money to get a meal. I hope to spreading kindness to those in need in any way possible.