增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1）．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Keeping a diary in English is the effective way to improve our English writing ability．

    First, it takes little time to finish a diary than other writings．By keeping English diaries, we can easy form the habit of thinking about in English．

    Second, we can practice use English idioms and useful structures in our diary-writing．If we have difficulty finding suitable words or phrases to express our opinion, we can turn in English dictionaries or teacher for help．This is also a kind of learning．If we can keep on doing this, we would gradually learn how express ourselves in English freely．

    In a word, it was of great benefit to keep diaries in English．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.

    We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.

    It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏间词符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（——），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11）不计分。

    My father took me out camping for the first time when I as seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.

    Ore evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target, Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.

    That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Sunday, some of my classmate and I took a bicycle trip along the “East Lake Green Road”. It specially built for people to relax ourselves. The scenery along the road was breathtaking, with big trees, fragrant flowers, tall hills and clear lakes in both sides. We stopped by a lake for the rest, where a great many people were playing happily. But something unpleasant caught up our eyes. There was rubbish here or there, and there were many plastic bags and bottles floated on the surface of the lakes. Such a beautiful place was so serious polluted. What a shame! Therefore* we couldn't help collecting the rubbish after we left.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Boys and girls,

    To make better use of the books we have used but no longer need them, we've planned to set up the book bank. We can recycle books and magazines that is in good condition in an effective way, thus avoided unnecessary waste. Meanwhile, the notes in our books can help another students learn their lessons efficiently than before. What's equal important is that, by using the recycling books, a lot of money can be saved.

    Therefore, it's necessary that the Senior 3 students generously donate the used books and other learning materials, that will definitely serve as excellent examples for the students in those lower grade.

Thank you!

Student Union

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Ʌ)，并在下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    A ship destroyed during a storm at sea and only two of the men on it were able to swim to the small and deserted island. The two survivors had been good friends. They agreed to pray to God separate. The first man prayed for food, a house and clothes. But like magic, all of these were given to them. However, the second man still has had nothing. Finally, the first man prayed for a ship such that he could leave the island and it worked well. As the ship was about to leaving, the first man heard a voice from heaven telling him it was the second man when prayed all his prayers would be answered. He was so touched that he burst into tear.