假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This summer, I attended a journalism-themed summer camp,
where I learn a lot.
I was deeply impressed by the interviews carrying out in the
streets. In the beginning, I wasn't used to talk to strangers. But under the
help of my teammates, I was able to communicate smooth with them. Then we were
noticed most of the answers that we got were brief. Before we discussed the
problem, my teammates and I realized that it was because the questions weren't
open-ended enough. So we changed their questions and our interviewees were more
willing to share with us their ideas in end.
From this experience, I've gained several skill for
interviewing people as a journalist.