假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1）. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2）. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Now I'd like tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation, in which I worked as the guide in a travel agency. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own. I've realized what hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I'll learn to share worry with my parents. I've learned how to get along well with others. Beside, I have gained some social experience and you have learned something that can't be learned from textbook. In a word, I had a wonderfully and valuable summer vacation.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Tom,

    I'm glad to hear that you are considering make up with Peter. If I am you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.

    As far as I know it, Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercises by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpfully in rebuilding your friendship. Beside, taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport. It's convenient him to get around as well.

    Apart from giving him the gift, you can also adopt other means, such as traveling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter how you do, being sincere was the most important. I really hope that you can be good friends forever.

Best wishes!

Li Hua

注意：1)．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2)．只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。

Dear Jin Jing,

    Your problem is common one among middle school students. Maybe the following advices can help you .First in all, believe in yourself. Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence. The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates. One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word. Your smile will show that you are friendly to him. Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interests with you. You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies. Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her. Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly.

Yours,

Lily

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My mother has always been a follower of traditional method when it comes to anything. She cooks traditionally food and likes the traditional way of shop. Therefore, now she always gets tiring when she goes out in the market. So one day I decide to introduce a new shop. I am talking about online gift stores. She has basic knowledge of computers. At the beginning, she was doubtful about shopping from these online gift shops.

    One day I taught him to buy some branded things so that she could build trust in these shops. I had ordered a Sisley handbag for her. Until then she has been shopping online.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    While sit in the dentist's waiting room yesterday, I saw another patients come out from an appointment. It seems that she was unable to balance. I stood up and reached out my arm to help him. She called someone pick her up. I stayed and talked about her until the dentist was called me in. Sometime I fall into the trap of thinking I need to do something bigger to lead a meaningful life. However, it's the little things which matter.