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删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Editor,

I'm the boy student in a key middle school in our city. I fond of play the piano. It is known by us that the college entrance examination is approaching. I must get good prepared for it. So I have only fifteen minutes to play the piano on every day. I don't want to give up my favorite, and my parents forbade me to continue playing it. They think it a waste of time to do it now. How do you think of it? Could you give me some advices on how to deal with the problem? I am looking forward to your early reply.

Thank you.

John

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Country music is one of the most popular kinds of music in the United states today because it is about simple but strong human feeling and events—love, sadness, good times, and bad times. It tells real—life stories and sound the way people really talk.

    Country music, sometimes is called country-western, comes by two kinds of music. One is traditional music from the eastern United States. The other is traditional cowboy music from the west. The singers usual play guitars. At first it is popular mostly in the South. And during World War II, thousands of Southerners went to the Northeast and Midwest to work in the factories. They took their music with them. Soldiers which were from the rest of the country went to army camps in the South learned country music. Thus they became popular all over country.

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删除：把多余的间用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I took the Harvard Summer School program in my vacation. During my stay there, I spend a lot of time studying in the main library Widener. I enjoyed myself in the ocean of knowledges, either doing research for my papers or read special edition books. The library, which it is named after its donor Harry Widener, stands right next to the Emerson building of philosophy. Opening a pair of heavy yet elegant metal doors, I was immediate bathed in warm light. I wandered around the library, fascinating to find one treasure after other.

    The library is a amazing place. One can fully experience the academic atmosphere only he visits the library. For me, the library as well as the courses explain Harvard's place as the home of devoted scholars.

增加：在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。

    Our school photography club is going to held an International High School Student Photography Show.

    As far as I know, the theme of the show is environmental protection. Actually, I know you are gifted in take good pictures and had always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I clearly remember you showed me some photo on that theme the last time when you visited our school. Beside, it will start on June 15^th and last three weeks. What makes me exciting is that any student whom is interested can participate in it. In word, I firmly believe this is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, send my photos to photoshow@126.com.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

March 1^st

Sunny

    Today I heard of my friend Li Mei. In her letter, she asks me about my dream job. After think for a long time, I am determined to become the teacher.

    I'd like to stay at school with students. The class is real like a big family, who can make me feel warm. Also it's fantastic to see us students become great people when they finally grow. What's more, teachers have summer and winter vacation. Therefore, I can have enough time to travel around the world.

    Beautiful as my future is, but I must work harder to get good grades and attend a famous college in order to achieve my goal.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

    As more and more people choose bike-riding instead of drive, bike-sharing enjoys great popularity in China. It's very convenient of you to use a mobike if you have a mobile phone. You just need to find the nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, but enjoy your trip. Compared with other form of shared bikes, a mobike have many advantages. One obvious advantage is that you can find a mobike easy and never worry about where to park them. In word, bike-sharing benefits people a lot. It has become a new way of transportation, that reduces traffic jams and helps protect the environment as well as.