增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2只允许修改10处，多者(从笫11处起)不计分。

     I'd like tell you something about your life in this boardingschool. I stay in a dormitory with three other girls, all of themare kind and nice. We get on wellto others and have become good friends. Living in aboarding school make me independent. I amconfidence to take care of myself, wash theclothes, and clean the rooms, which I neverdid when at home. The classeshere are very interesting and challenged. I'm still feeling a little dissatisfied with some other thing. The livingconditions are not as good as it at home and the chance to get in touch withthe outside world is limited. Anyway, I'll get usedto living here and hope everything will be more better soon.

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mike,

    I'm so glad to learn that you're coming to Beijing to studying Chinese. I have got too much information about foreigners learning Chinese. Here I'd like to recommend you famous language school—Red Star Language School. It happens to have such a Chinese trained course that will satisfy you demands. It starts in Jan. 20^th and lasts a month till Feb.19^th. It was intended for beginners like you. Instead, the tuition is reasonable. It cost only RMB 2,000 (about $240).

    If you have any more questions, and please let me know or just send an email to help@redstar.org.

    Hope to see you in Beijing soon.

Yours,

Zhang Wei

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；

修改： 在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Today Mr. Zhang, our English teacher, told us what to improve our English writing skills. The ability to write in English is becoming increasing important in English communication as well as in examinations. Thus, it was worth focusing our attention on.

    In order to write the good essay we should have an excellent command of over 2,000 frequently-used English word. It's necessary and useful for them to read or even recite beautiful English articles. Beside, as the saying goes, that "Practice makes perfect", so we should take every possible chance to write in English.

    According my personal experience, keep a diary every day is a good means to achieve the aim.

增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Every morning John goes to work by trains. He always buys a piece of newspaper, which help to make the time pass quickly. One Thursday morning, he turns to the sports page. He wanted to reading the news about an important football match the night ago. The news was such interesting that he forgot to get off at his station. He didn't know it when he saw the sea. He got off at the next station, and had to wait long time for a train to return back. Of course, he arrived very late at the office.  His boss was very angry when John told him why she was late. “Work is more important than football”, he shouted loudly.

增加： 在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改 10 处，多者(从 11 处起)不计分。

Dear Mr. Principal,

    I learned the news on TV that an accident was happened to the Chinese students in a PE class. I suggest that our school organizes a first aid course, that is very useful. The reasons why a first aid course is necessary are as follows: we students lack first aid knowledges. A first aid course can't satisfy our need. Beside, it will give information about many situations and give us the chance to practice first aid treatments.

    As for the course, they can be given monthly. The course should main include the practice of first aid treatments. It would better if the experts in first aid were introduced to instructing the course.

Yours,

Peter

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    When I was very young, I stayed at my hometown with my grandma. She was a diligent woman. She likes to grow vegetables or takes care of all the houseworks. Though my parents often ask her to quit the work, my grandma never listen. She takes that she does as her great joy. I understand her because I see her smile and satisfied with life. Several months before, my father bought for her a new smartphone. And during the Spring Festival, I instructed her on how email and use the Internet. Aside from emailing, she thinks it feels greatly to talk to their grandchildren on WeChat.