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I learned early in life that I had to be more patient ①{#blank#}1{#/blank#}改为{#blank#}2{#/blank#}②{#blank#}3{#/blank#}改为{#blank#}4{#/blank#}
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I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy.I was happy ⑤{#blank#}9{#/blank#}改为{#blank#}10{#/blank#} ⑥{#blank#}11{#/blank#}改为{#blank#}12{#/blank#}
when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got ⑦{#blank#}13{#/blank#}改为{#blank#}14{#/blank#} ⑧{#blank#}15{#/blank#}改为{#blank#}16{#/blank#}
angry and broke it.For a while parents bought me new ⑨{#blank#}17{#/blank#}改为{#blank#}18{#/blank#} ⑩{#blank#}19{#/blank#}改为{#blank#}20{#/blank#}
toys.But before long they began to see which was
happening.When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train,
my father said, "That's it.No more toys to you."
My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out
that with more patience I must make my toys to last.
My attitude change from then on.