假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Mrs
Brown was walking near a playground. She was a hurry to visit her four
grandchildren. She missed him very much, because she had seen them for quite a
long time. She was walking while suddenly she saw a ball coming in her
direction. She was already in her seventy. Should she kick the hall to send it
back and should she just go past leaving the ball where it was? Finally with
greatly care she gave it a kick. The hall went straight out the goal. How
wonderful it was! And she happened to have helped won the match. And all her
four grandchildren were on team of the winners.
