增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉；

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Last Saturday, my parents and I paid visit to my grandparents by train. There was a large number of people in the crowded train, but everyone help those who had lots of baggage and behaved politely. Along the way, we enjoyed beautifully views. At first, we saw one hill after another. Then what came into our eye were fields with green crops. In a six-hour trip, we arrived at my grandparents' house. Exhausted though I felt, but I was happy to see my grandparents, which I hadn't seen for a long time. It's really an excited trip because it was the first time I had taken so a long-distance train.

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增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I'll think of this experience.

增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出增加的词;

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉;

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。

    During the winter vacation last year, I thought I should do everything meaningful instead of stay at home. So I got a job at Meituan and worked there like a delivery boy. I worked eight hours a day for three week. The job was hard and tired and seemed endless, what made me so exhausted that I nearly gave it up halfway. And I stuck to it with great determination. Every day I went to work by foot early in the morning and got to home late in the evening. Finally I thought it is successful experience. Now, I really look forward to my final examination.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It's reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused widely attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinions, we should take road safety seriously in our daily life. While used the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect us. Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others. In the word obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Pele,

    I'm very sorry to hear that you feel lonely in the new school, because you find hard to make friends. Now, I'd like to offer you any advice .Firstly, it's normal of you to feel lonely because you were living in a new environment. Secondly, you should greet your classmates when met them on campus. Thirdly, it will be a good idea if you take an actively part in class activities, what can help them learn more about you. I believe you will be able to make new friends soon unless you're friendly to the others.

    I hope the above suggestion will be helpful to you and everything will be fine with you in the future.

Yours,

Li Hu

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误仅限1词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    High school is considered the most important stage. As senior three student, it will not be long before I graduated. Now I have many things to share in my fellows. First of all, I'd like to express my thank to those who lent me a hand when I was disappoint. It was their kindness which helped me regain my self-confidence when I lost my heart. Besides, I anxious want to clear up some misunderstanding with my friends in order to keep our friendships forever. With the National College Entrance Examination approached, I strongly recommend that we could value time and redouble efforts to study so that we can get into a key university.