增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Ms. Smith,

    I appreciate your help very well. On the first day of the camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone. After that, you always gave me specially attention and inspired to me to join in activities. As a result, I gradually got to know the other camper. Because the help you gave me that summer, my life changed. I gained so much confidence that I go back to school as a new person. My grades improved. I became  very active but made new friends. Today, I got a letter that said I had been admitting to a college. I am proud of it. Felt grateful, I just want to thank you for helping me become a different person.

①What you don't like him is none of my business.

②Tom, as well as his two sisters like music.

③You have no excuse for not go.

④His father died, leave the family worse off.

⑤Your teacher was really worried about you. You couldn't have left school without telling him.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear sir,

    I am sorry to write to you, but I feel it my responsibility to do so, so we should pay attention to our living environment while develop our economy. Yesterday we paid the visit to a chemical factory. When we go out of the factory, we saw that the environment nearby was so bad polluted. The water in the river was so black as coal. There were no living things in them. What's worse, the crops there didn't grow well. We hope our government can make the factory to take measures to prevent the pollution. Only in this way we live a health and happy life.

Yours,

Li Ming

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    The other day my friend Xu Rui found I am in low spirits, so she gave me a dozen roses to cheering me up. However, I only have one leave now, for I gave them all away. I gave one to my sister in hope that it would bring herself a little cheer. I took one to a friend who had not been feeling well recent. The flower or the visit helped much than I could tell but the friend was grateful. The rest went to those who had helped me in such many ways. Xu Rui gave me the flowers to help brighten up my day, but the biggest joy I received it was giving them away.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    The world seems to be facing two problem. One is that too many people are dangerous over-weighted. This type of problem called obesity(肥胖症). Obesity is when a person have more than 25-30 percent of body fat. The other problem is a illness called anorexia(厌食症). This is when people are dangerously thin; we are less than 85% of their normal body weight. All of these problems are very serious because of the body cannot work properly when it is too fat or too thin. The heart, liver, kidneys and lungs will not be able to keep the body health.

    People can die from illnesses causing by being too fat or too thin.