假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1)．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2)．只允许修改10处，多者(从笫11处起)不计分。

    I'm Wang Hong, a international student of Beijing University. I have something to talk with you. During last year's winter holiday, I go shopping with my classmates. While we were walking on the street, we saw several beggar standing on the road and asking for money. Many of them were disabling, which made me feel very much sad. Among them were old people, young people and even children. I noticed some passers-by ignore them instead of given them money. When I wanted to help them, my classmates stopped us. They told me whether these beggars were not worth showing mercy to because most them cheated people. Should I helped them?

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

①The function of smile is to show happiness and put people to ease.

②It is hard work as well as determination that have made him achieve everything he wanted.

③The actors in Disneyland brought much fun to the visitors, made them laugh happily.

④The boy's dream to take a trip to England has been come true.

⑤Body language makes possible for us to understand others better.

⑥Today most people around the world are more like to greet each other by shaking hands.

⑦To our great amuse, the kids performed on the stage in a funny way.

⑧News came from the school office which Fang Jianxun had been admitted to Tsinghua University．

⑨The detective novel is a attraction for me.

⑩Some parks are famous for traditional culture, other for showing the unique sights.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

    On a cold winter night, it was snowing heavily, a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because of the wet road. And all of them were trapping in the bus and what was worse, the bus ran out gas and it was very cold in it. They could do nothing but to wait for help. A man who lived nearby saw that had happened. He and some villagers managed to open the door and helped all of them out of bus. He took them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children. They spent two days in their home and finally help come. All of them were thankful with his help.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Tom,

    I'm glad to hear that you are coming for a holiday in our city the next month. I'm such happy that you will stay in my house.

    There have been greatly changes in the last three year in my home. First, we have rebuilt your house, which now has four private rooms. You can choose any of them to live when you come. Second, my parents have set up a small restaurant in our village, that you can eat healthily. I'm really willing to be your guide to make your journey interested and meaningful.

    If you had any requests, don't hesitate to let me know. Looking forward to hear from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My friend Tom has benefited great from humour. He is kind but overweight, that brings him a lot of problems. Once one of my classmates laugh at him, "why are you so fat?" We all stopped to stare at Tom, wonder how he would answer the question. She just said in a calm voice, "Well, because of my size must be large enough to hold my large heart of love." After hearing his word, we all burst into laughter. Not only does Tom take the joke, but he also managed to cope with the embarrassed situation. What important part humor plays in our daily life!