假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。

    I would like to interview Yang Liwei because he is not only the first Chinese to going to space but also one of the greatest astronaut in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration but I believe I can learn a great deal with him about it. If I could interview him, I would ask him what makes him an astronaut and how he trained. I would also like to know how he felt in the space and whether space travel is such great fun that I have read. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about her personal life, that must be very interesting.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    I left home at 17 and pay my own way through college.In the past 20 years,I have worked for everything I needed.So it shocks me what some people in their 20s,still get their life supported by our parents.Some of these parents have difficult supporting their families.

    It's true that the job market is much more harder these days.Therefore,there are certainly some ways to make living on our own.Even if our parents is nice enough to pay for our college,we shouldn't burden them with our problems.We should be financial responsible adults,made our parents proud of us.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    My school life is very interesting but meaningful. I usually get up at a quarter past six. After I wash his face, I read English for about half an hour. I think what it is a good habit. I always go to school by bike to eat lunch at school and have a short sleep on the classroom. In the afternoon school is over at 5 o'clock. After school, I often play basketball or do some other sport on the playground happy. I went home at about five forty. Have had supper, I watch TV for while, and then I do my homework. I go to bed at about 9:30.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    Last Monday, our English teacher told us put our writing books on the desks so that he could check them. Honest speaking, I didn't obey. However, I put my Chinese writing book on my desk. I really wondered how would happen. As the teacher found it out my trick, I pretended to be very surprising. “Oh, I'm sorry I took a wrong book for mistake because it has a same cover as my English writing book. I left my English writing book at home.” On hear this, the teacher said, “OK!”I narrowly escaped his punishment. Now I know I am wrong.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Our school conducts a survey on reading last week. According to the results, most students believe reading is important. Over 50% say they enjoy reading a lot of. 79% find it interesting while 21% think reading is bored. The results show that girls read much books than boys. Over 66% like to read fiction book. 64% of the students would like read stories about famous people. 50% are interested in reading our own culture and tradition. The survey also shows that libraries are how students get most of his books. Therefore, many students complain our school library don't have enough up-to-date books.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear cousin,

    Long time no see! It has been almost a year ever since you move to London. I miss you a lot of. I'm writing the letter to ask you for help. As you know, I am eager to be photographer like you, so I asked my parents to buy me the camera last week. But he told me I wouldn't concentrate in my schoolwork if I got it. Oh, my God! What can I make them trust me? I'm not a kid any longer, but I can control myself. What's worse, I have promised that I will take photos for the school's newspaper next month. When asking by my classmates, I will be absolutely embarrassed. Therefore, would you like to lend me some money? If you'd like, I will return it as soon as possibly.

Yours Sincerely,

Tom