假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    It doesn't matter to fail as long as you don't give up. To my opinion, it is hard to be successful. Challenges were a necessary part of your life as you grow up. And you won't necessary succeed in everything for the first time you try. That's okay. Some of the most successful people in the world are the one who've had the most failures. J．K. Rowling, wrote Harry Potter, had her first Harry Potter book was rejected 12 times before it was finally published. Michael Jordan was removed his high school basketball team. He lost hundreds of games and miss thousands of shots during his career. But he once said, “I have failed over and over and over again in my life. And that's because I succeed.”

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I as well as my parents are going to New York City this month. I had been looking forward to visit there for a long time. It is one of the most beautiful cities all over the world. There are many places of interests where you can learn it in school. I'd also like to see the Empire State Building. Unfortunate, the Twin Towers were destroyed in September 11, 2001, and I would have the chance to see them by himself. Now I am getting ready for the excited trip. I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience.

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

    Last month our school held a Reading Week, which aim was to encourage the students to read wide. During the week, book lovers recommended a plenty of good books suitable for high school students. In addition, two famous writers are invited to give lectures on how to understand and appreciate literary work. The poetry reading contest was another amazed activity for the students to bring his talent into full play. All the contestants took turns read their favorite poems to the audience. We all find the Reading Week very benefit. It has not only enriched our school life, and helped us form the habit of reading.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    Last Saturday afternoon, a charity sale held on our school playground. Although it was no easy task, students active participated in it.

    To organize it successfully, we' made full preparations. After the sale, from the students we collected variously second-hand goods which were still in good condition and classify them. Then came the big day. With all the teachers and students involve, the activity turned out to be successful. We raised 5,000 yuan for total at the end of the activity. All the money we raised up will go to the students from poor family to help finish their studies. It's so a meaningful activity that students look forward to the next charity sale.

増加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    In order to develop our interest in English, our school has set up several English clubs, among that the Radio Club is the most popular one. Every afternoon after supper, there are three students to run club. Students can play English songs, or read aloud English poems, essays, news, or story. I still remembered what happened when I hosted the programme for the first time two years ago. A week before it, I had searched the Internet for the later news, attractive topics and our loved English songs. Despite of good preparations, so nervous was I when I sat in front of the microphone that I felt my brain went blank. Thanks to the practice making before, I managed to calm down or concentrate. Several seconds later, I lost me in the broadcasting, really enjoying and appreciated it.

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除： 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意： 1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    My name is Li Lei. My parent love me very much. And it doesn't mean I can do everything I want at the home.

    First, I should finish your homework before Saturday evening to make sure I have enough time to make a review. It's necessarily. Second, I have to do wash by myself. This means I won't have enough time to play. I don't really understand what they ask me to do so.Third, I must sleep before 11 in the evening and get up at 6 the morning. I hoped I could sleep till 10 am someday.

    My friends seldom have enough time to relax,too. So I think I should listen to my parents. No cross, no crown.