增加：在缺词处加一个漏宇符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

刪除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2).只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Hi, Sharon,

    This is Li Xia. I'm writing to tell you that I am willing to do how I can to help you learn Mandarin (普通话). I win the first prize in a nationwide Chinese Speech Contest last term. However, you can depend on it that I will be up to this job.

    Besides, it is necessary for you to practice it as much as possibly. Here are two tips for you. Firstly, you^, d better to buy or download some listening materials. Secondly, we can make friends with classmates from China and frequent communication is of great important. Though having learned English for many years, I have difficulty in American cultures. I would appreciate if you could give me some advice on how to understand them better. I expect there to being a chance to learn from you.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Guilin is in Guangxi Zhuang Autonomous Region, China, famous of its mountains and waters. I went here last summer and stayed for five day. During that time not only I enjoy the fascinating scenery like the unique mountains and clean rivers, but also I try the traditional weaving of Zhuang people. That impressed me most was the amazing folk-song-singing competition on the Li River, which attracted thousands of visitors or locals. Guilin enjoys a worldwide fame for it beautiful scenery, so it's well worth visiting. I am strongly recommend you to visit it. I believe you will have a wonderfully time.

增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把 多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起 ）不计分。

   I'll never to forget my favorite teacher from second grade, Miss Wang. I loved her so much I wanted to become a teacher just like him one day. At home I would make my own classroom for which I would teach my dolls. I believed that teach students would give me lots of fun. As the result, I really did become a public-school teacher. I taught elementary school（小学）at first. Although I had a degree in education, I found I wasn't total prepared for teaching —the job was much hard than I thought. It's difficult to teach students of different level well.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Our school conducts a survey on reading last week. According to the results, most students believe reading is important. Over 50% say they enjoy reading a lot of. 79% find it interesting while 21% think reading is bored. The results show that girls read much books than boys. Over 66% like to read fiction book. 64% of the students would like read stories about famous people. 50% are interested in reading our own culture and tradition. The survey also shows that libraries are how students get most of his books. Therefore, many students complain our school library don't have enough up-to-date books.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    One Saturday morning, I suddenly noticed my room was a completely mess, what really annoyed me. I realized too many useful things took up a lot of space. So I decided to throw it away and do some cleaning. It took me a whole day get all the works done. Finally the room was tidy again and everything was in the order.

    This was also true for life: we add more and more to our life, hoped to get a better life. But sometimes the more we add, the bad our life becomes, After all, sometimes less is more.