增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出修改后的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sally,

    Now I'd like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own.I've come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I'll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I've learnt how to get along well with others.

    What's worse, I've gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can' t be learnt from textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In a word, I had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

Yours,

Li Bing

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处, 多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。

    I'd like to introduce Sarah to you. She is a good friend of me. Actually she is an exchange student from Ireland, which has been studying in my school for two month. Wanting to take an advantage of her short time here, Sarah works hardly. She had not studied Chinese before arriving here, but she has some difficulty communicating with people. She woke up early every morning to study a bit before class. I admire her independence for doing all of this while live so far away from her family. Besides, Sarah is in great help. Busy as she is, she often takes time help classmates with their English homework. A lovely girl, isn't she?

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    Last Saturday, feeling so boring, I wanted to experience something new. So I go online and found a nursing home what I could volunteer.

    The next day, I paid a visit the nursing home. At first I didn't know what to expect, but after greeting the elderly and talking to them patient, I was surprised by how thankful they were for their visit. Moreover, I was touched by their attitudes towards life. Although they were old, but they were young at heart.

    Volunteering provides many chance to change people's lives, include my own. If everyone makes a effort, the world will surely be a better place.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

    I am a Grade three student in China. I hope to go to your university to learn English after finish my high school. English played an important part in our daily life but I like it so much that I want to be a teacher of English. I have a little difficult in English. But I will study hardly to improve it if I have an opportunity go to your university. Besides, I like your city because it has an environment which differs with my city. And I will make many friend and communicate frequently with him. I'd appreciate it if you take my application into the consideration.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：①每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

②只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Tom,

    How are you getting along? I don't think this is a good idea to travel a lot and visit as many place as possible. Last July Bell paid a visit on Europe. Europe was very beautiful, but his holiday wasn't very nicely. He visited several countries, and was in each of the countries for only three days. He visited a good many places of interest, but was always in hurry. Though he returned from Europe, he was very tired. So I suggest that you spent your holiday in a different way. We had better travel with a friend to one country and to visit only one city at a time. You'll be able to have a good time.

Yours sincerely,

John

注意：⒈每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    Sorry that I haven't been in the touch with you for a while. But I catch cold last week, and I've been in bed for four day. I'm feeling better today. Lucky my classes won't start till next week.

    I have good news. I'm going to a conference in you town in May, from 16th to 20th. Could you recommend a hotel where is in the centre of town? It needs to be somewhere not too expensive because the tight budget. I'll have a freely half-day for sightseeing. Do you think you can showed me around?

    Looking forward to hear from you soon.